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Overall, a great story so for. An OP main character who's trying to blend in with regular kids. There's interesting interactions and a few kick a## moments. My only complaint as far as quality is that the author appears to have a hard time with pronouns. My big complaint is the update frequency. It's all over the place. There'll be a chapter everyday for a few days then a big break then another chapter then another break. The latest break is 8 days. It would be nice if there was a steady release schedule.
I'm not sure what's going on with the world, but I like the characters. The mc keeps trying to be low-key even when it doesn't seem like he has to be which is annoying. He seems cool though. My big complaint is that the translator makes stupid mistakes constantly. They're minor but still irritating. It seems like (s)he can't get though a single paragraph without screwing up a pronoun. Women are called he and men are called she constantly. (S)he referred to a brother and sister as brothers. Like I said, minor but irritating. The translator really needs to work on that.
Wrong personal pronouns It should be Siblings instead of brothers and the words his, him, her and hers have not been used properly. Storyline is great but the English of it is wrong. Otherwise it is a great story
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The story progresses erratically hopefully it gets better as it goes on I hope the author stabilizes it and continue with a more expansive story line
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Niiice. A good read with none of the spelling mistakes that you find in other books on this website. Can't wait to read more soon hopefully. Gsusetejsusyehrkdidydjehrue
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