GreatSage_Master1
Man, you really need an editor. It’s painful to read because of wrong vocabulary, misspelling, bad conjugation etc. It seems like a nice story but however nice it is, the readers can’t appreciate it if they don’t understand what you’re saying. Other than that not really many problems. Kinda common idea but that’s not necessarily a bad thing same thing with the character design.
Really good story so far! Each chapter has been well crafted, and I continue to find myself wanting more. There are places where we get a glimpse of a backstory between some of the characters that promises to be interesting, and the MC's somewhat dry and sarcastic humor is very entertaining. The only thing negative I could say, if this could be considered negative, is that I wish it was released faster and in larger quantities!!! Good job author and editor!
very cool story so far (I hate this limitation of 140 characters) (I hate this limitation of 140 characters) (I hate this limitation of 140 characters) (I hate this limitation of 140 characters) (I hate this limitation of 140 characters) (I hate this limitation of 140 characters) (I hate this limitation of 140 characters)
so far its just getting gowing. lovet the first part about sleepy kid . but you just No he sees everthing about hes inviroment . cant what to see hoe the preses gets him in trubol lol . thanks so far ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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