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So far, so good. Little to no errors in grammar, concept is well-presented, and narration is conveyed beautifully. The descriptions contains just the right amount of details as the author displays the intricacy of her writing. The characters are dynamic also. A well-deserved five star. Keep up the good work.
The story seems to have an interesting plot that has great potential. The writing style is nice and has many descriptive details. My favorite part about this novel is the story development. It's not fast-paced and allows the characters to interact naturally. The characters are all thoughtfully designed. Keep writing and good luck, author! :)