Mujunel_the_Mystic
The story is very well written, it is so far the best sports story I have read and it represents very well what sport is and all of them have characters with a lot of personality and the players are wonderfully represented. So far he's doing very well and now the question: which Premier League team will Zachary play for after his time at Juventus? Personally I would like to see him at Liverpool because let's be honest everyone likes Jürgen Klopp
This novel will make you hooked right from the beginning. From my standpoint its one of the best novels i have read and cant wait for more chapters to be released. Only downside is that all the new chapters gets put in priv and demands you to overpay for it. With all factors included ill give this one a 8/10.
Writing quality: 5⭐ It is excellent. Stability update: 5⭐ It is stable. Story development: 1⭐ I don't particularly like it, not at all. I hate AIs that talk over your head. You exaggerate the abilities of average players. You exaggerate the importance of training and the science of soccer over the art that is soccer, which is, in my opinion, the true essence of the beautiful game. What the protagonist does as training could not be done by a normal person without getting injured and therefore he should already be the best in the world, incoherence. There is no logic between what the system poses about his skills and the skills of other footballers, especially in terms of talent. Character design: 4⭐ The characters are very alive but I don't end up liking the MC, I find him too rigid, with a constant loser attitude. World background: 5⭐ It's the best thing about this story, no more words.
It’s a amazing book honestly I rarely give good reviews because most stories start becoming bad after 100 chapters. But for this one I can’t wait for their to be more. Everything is 5 stars besides the updating stability. I’ll give that a one star because we can go a week without a chapter and then suddenly we get 3. In the future I hope the release dates become more stable and I certainly hope the author dosent drop the book. Other than that it’s a great book 9 out of 10
Probably the best football novel I've ever read online, and it's not even close. The only thing I would say is a negative is the waiting for a new chapter, but that's something probably everyone has to deal with when it comes to stories they like. At least in this one the stability of updates is relatively good. If you like football, try this, I promise you won't regret it.
This is one of the best stories in this website in my opinion. The system isn't too op but satisfying. Every aspect of the story is engaging and hasn't gotten bogged down with solid progression. The world well constructed and the characters are great. The only that I found is that fact that the dialogue can be a little bland.