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THE GREATEST OF ALL TIME

Author: Mujunel_the_Mystic
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Black_sheep_
Black_sheep_Lv13

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PicoPico
PicoPicoLv2

This story is the best football novel i ever read, its just sad i'm not reading it here but in another site cuz here you need to pay money, i saw it 1 year ago and it was free,i didnt have the time to read it, so i decided to wait and i came back i find that you need to pay money to read it. I came here to give it 5 stars cuz it deserve it.

Hobo_Hank
Hobo_HankLv14

I have to say this is easily my favorite sports novel on the site. As a fan of soccer, I love the premise, and the novel is very well written. The grammar is good, no noticeable mistakes. The system isn't super prominent and doesn't take over the story, the main focus is still soccer, while the system just enables the MC. The system isn't too OP, just enough to give our MC the edge over the competition. The story progresses logically and gradually, no major hiccups that throw the story off. I highly recommend for anyone who needs something enjoyable to read.

RDMON
RDMONLv12

I rarely review the work of any author, but this novel not just for killing time or having a story to read this novel is a piece of art. yeah u heard me a master piece. This novel is more more than just a story it is inspiring, encouraging, and fulfilling. I learned many things from this novel one of them is that do not just be good with what you have achieved, but aspire for more. Lke the MC he first want just to join a good club and play, but when he achieved that he did not stopped ther he wanted more. other point that good about this novel is how the MC did not get distracted or strays away from his goal and you can see that by the girl he met in the academy he did not allow her to distract him from his training or like his friends when he asked him to join him in Christmas break he did not go but kept training. I think this more than enough to show the new readers how amazing this novel. Mr.Author I hope you donโ€™t drop this novel half way. you are really born to write I have read many novels but yous is more than just a novel what you are doing is art. keep the hard work and I hope what I wrote mean something to you.๐Ÿ‘โค๏ธโค๏ธ๐Ÿ‘โœŒ๏ธโœŒ๏ธ

AaronchifV2
AaronchifV2Lv13

A very good system sports novel, the MC doesnโ€™t play like Messi in his first game. He trains far more than any player and is truly dedicated to perfecting his craft. The system gives him elixirs which raises his training effect. It gives him a few other things as well but its very well balanced. Major downside is the updating quality. The author can go for a month without any warning, release a few chapters then immediately go on another month Hiatus. Apart from that irs truly one of the best Sport System Novels :)

hacky999
hacky999Lv4

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Aenor
AenorLv2

This novel is very good, the quality of the writing, story development and character development is well done, and using the real world as the background was also a very good choice, it's been a very good experience to read this novel.

Saberswordguy
SaberswordguyLv10

Author are you okay Is there writers block or maybe something happened cause the novel has truly been good but the update is just well โ€ฆ.โ€ฆโ€ฆโ€ฆ.โ€ฆโ€ฆvery bad anyway just concerned

sirLoinFang
sirLoinFangLv1

All I can say is that this is one of the best, if not the greatest football novel around. I'm not even a soccer fan but this novel made me really interested in Football. ZACHARY BEMBA FTW. MORE CHAPTERS PLZ

GREAT
GREATLv12

This novel is already among my best 4 novels. My best 4 novels are the kings avatar, the legendary mechanic, release that witch, and library of heaven's path. that alone is enough to validate it, so try it out.

Adrian_Wamae
Adrian_WamaeLv13

One of the best sports books of all time. Actually feels nice for once finding a book like this .

John_Jiggler
John_JigglerLv2

Great sports novel. I was not expecting much initially. But this novel is great. Writing quality is quite good. System is very well done, no loli administrator later administator is a plain AI. System is well balanced, MC still has to work hard. Side characters are decent. None of them are overly irritating. The only problem are the female characters, all of them are beautiful, with great curves. No always underdog MC. Great A novel i am willing to pay for

Akahime
AkahimeLv11

I've already written a review about this novel, but I came here to emphasize something again, this novel is a masterpiece, the best novel I've ever read!

Darith_Sky
Darith_SkyLv11

Reveal spoiler

basti_buentiempo
basti_buentiempoLv1

everything is good, the grammar, updates, and plot. But the only problem is their names. i mean i forgot who are the wings, forward and blahblah. their names are hard to remember.

Zororis
ZororisLv13

I was still dipping my toes into the literally sports fiction pool, finding what works for me and what doesnโ€™t. The greatest of all time by mujunel the mystic is definitely my cup of tea and any other novel written by him, I will definitely read.

The_butcher
The_butcherLv4

No doubt greatest football novel of all time.... excellent background and base story... well defined system.... All the hard work especially author focusing on all the training and determination even with the system.... And all the up and downs in the story.... Great job author ๐Ÿ‘Œ

Mairo_Agbodo_8886
Mairo_Agbodo_8886Lv3

Man, you're the best. I've read a lot of big and interesting novels by big authors, your novel has the right potential to be among those books. The concept is so intriguing, and I'm a football, Barcelona, and Messi fan. I hope he later joins Barcelona, and play with Messi. Thanks Author, 5 stars is all I can give to you for the nice work. Keep it up.

Kane_Stone
Kane_StoneLv13

**** you.................,...........................,...................................................๐Ÿ˜‹ I tried reading it for free now I've to pay o well cherry o

RESilversalt
RESilversaltLv15

Well to put it short, its a lovely read if you want something to pass time. That being said it sometimes might lack substance at times it get quite short to read, but that being said it captures the most important moments of the story quite well, the writing quality, is superb i would say, there are the occucainal mix ups, i've read up till chapter 89, untill here nothing to complain about. the characters are well not quite that deep, but its kind of what you would expect from a fast paced sports novel. as for the world background not much to say, it takes place in our world, if it ever get seralised this might be a problem for authour but that time sleeps i bellieve.