Reviews of The God Of Fire In Naruto [Paused]

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i really like this novel. apart from slow updating rate. everything is great.... i really like this novel. apart from slow updating rate. everything is great.... i really like this novel. apart from slow updating rate. everything is great....

Have to drop this when he start consider others .i mean it just dumb man like WTF he just became a wussy Help others like he is a hero and teaching them the shinigam way 🤢 So peace out ✌

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cool, read this mtfck ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████ ██████████████████████████████████████████████████

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Very noice. I can confirm MC is the God of fire. noicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoicenoice

nice ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

All good except you should really explain the bleach part and make it fit the puzzle that is the novel ÀaaaaaaaAaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaàaaaakjajanababsbsbbdbsbdbsbdsbehhdhshdhzhjzhnaNebdnfnnznwjxjznjkja

Eu não posso dizer que tem que melhorar,para uma Fanfic essa e ótima Mais sem querer ser chato,os personagens da história tem muito pouco desenvolvimento,principalmente os 3novos sinigamis,seria legal também Acompanha o desenvolvimento de rei e da sua zampakuto(ryuzim algum coisa)sabe eles construindo um relacionamento,não de amor mais de confiança,como amigos,faça também rei percebe o poder que ele porta,que nem percebe que"com grandes poderes vem grandes responsabilidades"<3😘😘😘

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Hi there. I started reading this because I liked your other book I may or may not have read. Or I could just have started it because you liked or replied to my comment somewhere. What ever the case, here’s some stars and a review...

this has a lot of potential to be long running novel if done right. multidimensional travel to other anime worlds is plausible too. I hope this novel continues with steady updates and reaches its full potential.

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