The Genius Mage
- Overall Rate
- Translation Quality
- Updating Stability
- Story Development
- Character Design
- world background
For a beginning its great. There are a few grammar errors lots of repetitive but after a edit it would be a 5. For 40 chapters its a great start. Keep up the great writing π
Translation quality is alright but not impressive. The Gramar is good but there are some sentences that are obviously wrong. Updates are... The story is the same as any other chinese regression novel with a female MC. Most of the ploting and choices seem to be made without reasonable motivation, but instead to check of boxes/ because the Author felt like it. The Characters and world background are barely thicker than paper, and there are already contradictions at chapter 13.
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Its a translated, transmigrated novels with a lot of short chapters which means its likely to have over 1000 chaps. Its likely to have its typical tropes, however on a whole the novel is not a bad read for a trial as I'm not bored. If it gets picked, I'll continue to read it. Looking forward to the journey the characters. The FL is not bad, has a somwhat weak but caring father and some decent people around her. What I find annoying is the level explanation for various stuff which can be a headache and the typical repeat of trash who has undergone a surprising personality/power transformation which is strange to those who "know" her. I am sure there will be very few logics or sense in future chapters. In such a case, I advise readers to leave their common sense at a low level or blank for that matter.
Good story. the story becomes better and better. I like reborn genre very much. especially with a strong woman. the choice of names for a man could be better. Kate is normally a name for a woman. here it is used for a man. confusing .
Honestly, it is the first I find it difficult to rate a novel. PerHaps because Of the short chapters, or perhaps the story is dragging. I always love a strong Female Lead but given the 40 chapters, cultivation is so slow and the story has not even reached a thrilling part. Oh well, parHaps need to read deeper into the next cHapters to get that excitement to keep the novel.
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a pretty good novel. while there are a few gender mistakes and some really weird name choices it's a Pretty good novel. ot does use some tropes but not overly so
I am so loving this story please pretty please keep it going and let it be chosen so it can be continued βΊππππππππππππππππΉπΉπ
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i can already hear the face-slapping even though i haven't read it π although i feel even by the description its a very good book! keep it up and get picked, mini author-sama!!
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first review im writing, book is looking pretty fire so far hope they can actually publish it. no grammar mistakes didn't really feel like I was reading a web novel for a moment.
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good story ... hope it will be picked up... . looking forward to it. ...... ...... ................ .................................................................