Reviews of The First Vampire

I thought it was gonna be great. The beginning of the first vampire. Unbelievable awesome story. Nope. It’s a simple story with naïve little boy being a night not your vampire bro you’re actually a killer you drink blood to live. It’s an actual horrible story so do not waste your time.

I have read 150 pages so far and decided to write a short review. This is a refreshing vampire novel. So many are copy and pasted with little difference between how they progress and how the main character grows in strength ect. This is different and actually enjoyable. Impressive work to say the least in my eyes. I'll continue reading and update the review when I catch up to the author.

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hehe boy \o/

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This is a political novel, and the author doesn't know what it means to be a vampire except they can't die

This is a captivating story where we, as readers, are pulled into a world of fantasy with a healthy dosage of wits and schemes . The characters are multilayered and adequately complex further unveiling ing the plot in a ravishing manner.

Meh, shabby work. everything is basically a wall of text and past that is a shallow world building and basic characters.

was going good until he cheats on the fml

I have just started reading this book and I slightly regret it because it’s so good. The characters feel life-like and I can understand the Mc’s aims and goals. The intrigue and plot is realistic and it is nice to see the MC learn more and more about his unique nature and rules of being the first vampire. The translation is good though there are word mix ups sometimes. The context allows you to know what word the writer meant to put instead. The only reason I regret is that paying for chapters part which is necessary with most of Webnovels collection as I want to see more and more of the story. I wish there was a buy a book option to no longer pay for chapters but oh well.

I love this book please keep writing more chapters 🙏🏾

this is actually a quite good novel. but the format of paragraph is killing me when read with mobile phone. if there are any good editing. I really want to know what is next for the mc

This story is surprisingly good to read. But from the chapters released it’s as if the author forgot that mc is a vampire and has barely touched that part. Maybe in the future we’ll see more things related to him being *THE* first vampire, but so far it’s just a story about reincarnating into a noble son.

I've read it and it honestly is amazing, there's no system or anything like that, he just got thrown in the other world as a vampire and has to face assassination and get on the run and he doesnt overpowered from the beginning. Too bad they didn't pick it as expected😮‍💨

I Need More. Great read 10/10. Nice pacing, interesting Setting and i did not See any glaring mistakes concerning spelling and grammar. A really great read!

I swear if this not gonna get picked I’m still going to this site ——————————————————————————————————-——————————————-——————————————————————————————————-

It is very promising! MC is very pragmatic and cool headed. He has a good understanding of how the world works and is not above deceiving others to get into a better position. Hope this one gets picked.

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haven't read it yet but I'm seeing good reviews so I'm getting my hopes up...........................................,................................