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Reviews of The First Supernatural (Twilight Fanfiction)

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The First Supernatural (Twilight Fanfiction)

Mike_Cockaka

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fkb
fkbLv5fkb

Just read the chapter it's good I Can't explain my happiness after finding a novel with a freaking good author i loved it you alternated between the mc and the caveman leader , also the discription of the fight between the mc and the two sabercats (hhhhh)was on point .... Keep it up have a nice day

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WeatherMansduck
WeatherMansduckLv13WeatherMansduck

was going great at first, not so frequent updates but it was still happening so that's ok. But then everything just stopped, it's been 8 months since the last chapter and I doubt there will be any more which is sad. Other than that definitely a good short read

Tyyx_4u
Tyyx_4uLv1Tyyx_4u

The story idea is great. It has a lot of potential ahead. From what I've seen so far, I want to believe he's a dominated MC, and I like that too much. The descriptions and narrative are very good, the overall quality of the writing is amazing. It allows me to imagine everything logically without being too excessive with unnecessary detail. I sincerely hope you don't give up and that the MC is a true MC, an alpha predator! (I also look forward to some romance and kingdom building.) Peace and good luck, you are a good writer!

Shinto_no_Kami
Shinto_no_KamiLv2Shinto_no_Kami

This is really good....I just hope it isn't dropped. This fanfic has length, good story and good descriptions. Perfect to read tbh. Anyone who just likes fanfics could easily get addicted to this.

Demes_LR
Demes_LRLv3Demes_LR

Sinceramente me está encantando la historia sobre todo la parte en la ej se convierte en el oso de cara corta ya que también es uno de mis animales favoritos incluyendo el entelodonte y el ienodonte, así que si planeas seguir con esta historia tendrás todo el apoyo de mi parte. Sigue así eres muy bueno

Mattigician
MattigicianLv3Mattigician

love it please keep writing don't stop please!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]

Alax_Gecko
Alax_GeckoLv4Alax_Gecko

hello, from 2023 here. Love the story very much and want to see it continue but it looks like the Author has forgotten his password. I hope he/she is alright tho. If you ever come back, please continue this story cuz there are many who enjoy it. it is really sad, that a good story like this just stops abruptly. I wish you are well Author.

August_fallenfrost
August_fallenfrostLv3August_fallenfrost

So far it’s an amzing book with a really thought out mc. The word building is pretty good but the way the mc progresses throughout the story makes it braw you in and think of what’s gonna happen next. I can’t wait for more chapters to be uploaded. If your looking for a good story to read with a original character that’s not to op and not some pushover then I highly recommend this book for you.

Carlos_Balbizan
Carlos_BalbizanLv1Carlos_Balbizan

the idea of ​​being accidentally thrown into the past when reincarnating has become a cliché... why not just start a new story? other than that, it's a pretty average story. it deserves a 3.5 but the update is totally inconsistent so 2.8 stars is the most it gets

Ivanicjpg
IvanicjpgLv15Ivanicjpg

This story is really quite interesting, it is a twilight fan-fic but since it is set in 10000 BC its really its own self-contained story with mythological beings and such. really well done with long chapters and quite humorous dialogues from the MC's and side characters perspectives. If you have read the synopsis and didn't really like the twilight theme just forget about that as this is a story about the MC with a kind heart and maybe a 'bit' bloodthirsty that became a werebear living in 10000 BC until the actual story of twilight starts So join me and many others for the ride!!

IQuoted
IQuotedLv5IQuoted

after five months ur finally back PLEASE DONT DROP THIS AND DONT RUSH THIS this is godly in a way its godly lol im just going for the word count but know this novel is an extremely sweet dessert

Dragonfenixx
DragonfenixxLv1Dragonfenixx

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Moonsloth
MoonslothLv14Moonsloth

I think it has a lot of potential and i enjoyed reading every chapter of it. could just wish it had more chapters. Hopefully it doesn’t get dropped.

bigdaddy_D
bigdaddy_DLv14bigdaddy_D

don't drop.............................................. ..................................................................................

Kyle_Ebanks
Kyle_EbanksLv4Kyle_Ebanks

Continue plz.................................................🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂🙂

General_Frozt_8890
General_Frozt_8890Lv4General_Frozt_8890

this has got to be one of the most interesting spins on a twilight fanfic I have ever seen, and from what I've read, it isn't that bad. I highly recommend this if this is your first fanfic.

Tyler2803
Tyler2803Lv12Tyler2803

I love it I can't wait to see where it goes