The First Store System

this was the first novel that i actually enjoyed reading

intresting and it's not cliche ............... ....

I didn't see a Romance tag si I bet this novel will bored you in a hundred chapters so I pass but 5 star for the title but this book Tags hesitate me to read so tell me if there's is any love interest

The first view chapters were ok, but not really that interesting. After the store moved into a city, the story went from "ok" to "can't stop reading". The grammar is not perfect, but still very good. I read and read and read until the free reading time was over, then I was sad. Really good book so far (ca. chapter 250).

it is a good novel overall. .. I liked the story and fun to read but there are some that is not so satisfying like short novel and info dump (only sometimes) I recommend it

I wish there are more novel like this... It so good and I am excited to know what will happen to the store and to Aakesh if they ascended to the sacred dimension and third dimension ?.. What kind of costumer the store will have?...

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Good novel but ive been scammed i just Found 3000 chaoters of this online.

Nice story 😊.. . .

So far quite a good novel , mc is quite mysterious since even the system which is meant to be emotionless is quite respectful to him , mc isn't someone who is completely crazy that can live forever being alone which gave him the little cat which makes sense imo , overall really good just a bit too many chapters that need to be unblocked apart from that it's great.

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this should be called a slice of life novel, theres so many fillers. it took atleast 3 chapters for the time to advance for one day. idk if some of it is fillers. characters are meh, you introduce so many characters yet they are so forgettable. the first character or customer you introduce is nice enough but after that, its just downhill. basically, maria, elves and the kingdom are the characters. everything else is unnecessary introduction

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Tambahkan ulasan Kualitas menulis Memperbarui Stabilitas Pengembangan Cerita Desain karakter latar belakang dunia Tarif Keseluruhan 5.0 Ulasan harus lebih dari 140 karakter

If anyone is interested to know, the cover the author used for their novel at the time this was written, is Pamela from League of Angels franchise. She present in all 3 games from LoA 1 to LoA 3.