The First Store System

There are some mistakes in grammar and it just seemed liked those chinese novels which are very predictable and cliche.

The character design and world background are 5 stars for me. I got bored reading somewhere in chapter 530+ but I still read it until chapter 666. Too much training info; if there's no major event happening there's always training chaps for 2-5 out of ten chapters for 1 weapon that I decided to stop reading. even tho it's already chapter 600's there still chapters only about his training.

This book is well written, interesting content, but I find the main character to be too apathetic and the attitude towards death and killing is very casual. Killing an entire race of people because of an organization led by members of their race seems to be a bit overboard… (just one example). The mc has a level of apathy that doesn’t lend itself well to adding other characters to the story, and leads to a somewhat 2 dimensional and bland character. It feels impersonal, somewhat depressing, and unlike many other stories there is nothing about the mc that makes me want him to succeed.

I loved this novel really much I had been reading this novel when it has only 100 chapters around when I read novel I found something interesting that the words he used when Aakash used spells were all from Hindu mantras

I enjoy the idea and the world building love the deva and creation stuff, personally I am dropping it, not on the authtor just isn’ my cup of tea. Maybe I should have read more but didn’t like the main character’s personality. Lily, can be annoying, but I like the realistic dependence/ coampaionship they have together, for most of their really long existence they have only had each other. The MC spoil Lily, because of course he would view others as the same level of being as her, like your family versus a stranger. I honestly wish we got more of the beginning stuff, the different lives and accomplishments of customers.

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this novel is the opposite of (the immortal wine store novel) but I still enjoy it never the less but the first 10 to 20 chapters was not interesting to me but i kept persisting and found out the later half was excellent good novel to read, highly recommended

Solid 4 star love the characters writing could be improved but its still completely understandable, good update stability , plot is a bit on the slower paced style with a bit of mystery 💕💕

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this book is a fine piece of art among other books within this category and difference so very clear so I highly recommend this to you if you interested in this type of book among the many the introduction (first 10nchapters) I was partially lost has to what was going on until author gave some more detailed flashback so I will encourage others readers to be strong and read past those chapters so you can see where the real plot begins. I know some readers don't enjoy flashbacks that much(I don't like heavy flashbacks but I think this is okay) but apart from that everything is decent from characters to world building and side characters( which I would congratulate the author for cutting out the bland side characters I used to know and bring some variety) all in all solid 10/10 highly recommended

Great

story is good but character design has a problem I think (may be due author)

the author has a lot of interesting ideas, creating many cool events and impressive world building. My only complaint is the repetition of the same daily cycle. You can easily remove 600 chapters of repetition.

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I'm on episode 14 and it's going very well right now.And I love multiverses etc. I also liked the system, I hope the sequel will be good, I also liked the cruelty of the main character towards other beings, I hope it continues like this.

Aakesh and Lily really sound odd. It could be Alex and Lily or Allen and Lily........

Only read till chapter 44, The girl Maria will be taken as a worker in the fututre? Cause that girl want to really hold closer to MC. Also most of the problem can be resolved by at least showing equal strength to the KING since he can manipulate what the other can see.While I understand Maria and maybe some people will be biased because shes' a woman. The first store said it's a safe place but she was harassed inside. Just verbally abusing her means he disregard your store. You don't need the usual face slapping cause the guy is literally God in that place.If you want peace then always be ready for war. Also it's kind of hard to develop feelings for the story or character since there are nothing to like so far even the MC cat or humor. Still, I can see the allure of this novel.

if your someone who cares about morality then don't bother reading this, the mc is over 80k years old and he's not even human so him not caring about them is normal heck even humans don't care about humans.the story is enjoyable and it's a change of pace from a lot of other system novels out there

The world is very well written, although some characters can get a little annoying it's still really good. some things are still shrouded in a little bit of mystery. Overall it's a good novel and very likely an English somewhat translated and semi inspired version of the novel 神级店长(god level store manager), that novel is only in Chinese for now, so you would enjoy reading this one more i guess. Author did you read that novel? god level store manager?