The First Store System

I Just love these types of books i dont see them Oftem so Im definitely gonna keep reading it! This is just for the writing requirement Ssakan

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So far the way the story is written is unique and good. The background is not confusing and power levels are easy to understand. I'll give it 5 stars for the chapter so far. Depending on how the story goes forward I might reduce it or leave it as is.

Overall good but you need to make the whole first 20-22 chapTers as prologue section/volumE. i skipped reading most of those and did noT feel like i missed anything.

well written and has a lil bit of uniqueness , will wait for more chapters and then do an actual review , loving it until now btw , keep going author .

I've read most of the story and it's cool for the most part but I Wouldn't recommend it. The author is a big fan of asides or tangents and this isn't bad and I don't think they are poorly written. However after 1000+ chapters it makes me feel a lot of these new characters or showing items or there side stories are pointless. Now there are some that do have the story and I have no issue but honestly after chapter 1000 I started skipping a lot of chapters because to me they weren't important to the plot at all. I still rate this story highly and it's interesting just frustrating to read. The author does a good job writing and you can feel their enthusiasm come through that's why I'm not criticizing the tangents. I think this novel also suffers from how many others react to the store but you can only see this too many times before it's just the same scene over and over. The author could probably work on that but it's not that bad! I haven't really talked about the story or characters but they are fun mostly i wish there were less characters that didn't matter but the MC and main characters are cool enough and the world and story is interesting. I'm probably going to drop reading this and if it completes check the ending for answers. The beginning is very interesting and if my review doesn't turn you off I'd say go for it. 4/5 from me.

This is a really good novel with an apathetic mc, but he does love his cat really much until my actual chapter 230 lily didn't get that much screen time like the most recommendations suggest. give it a try😁

A HIDDEN GEM... I don't know why it is not famous but I really love the story. This story starts with an op MC. I read a lot same genre or type of story where the Mc is op at the start but I easily get bored cause as the story progress it became boring that's why always dropped it halfway through. I still look for same type of story though. Unlike other op characters though, the story does not makes me lose interest in it in fact I enjoyed it.

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Just filled with so much nonsense that I found it impossible to read and enjoy. The writing was so repeat8ve I found my self wondering if I had read this and skipping over large paragraphs

It was pretty good at the start…now I’m having doubts. In chapter 74 he pretty much gets a VR game, I was so excited when I started reading this and now I feel like it’s going to be more focused on this game, like so many other books, then his store and personal progress. I’ll keep reading for now but if it turns out to start focusing more on the game then Im just going to drop. This isn’t the only novel with this idea after all, will just read one of them if it become a vr novel. Im hoping it doesnt since its not in the tags but I’ll see ig.

This is a great read! No romance or crazy drama which is great! More of “slice of life” of MC, which I really like. Also, the subtle humor is great! Keep up the great work!

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it feels too much like astral pet store except it's just remodeled is what I felt I haven't read more than 40 chapters so take it or leave it

I read about 300 chapters before dropping. It's hard to give this a bad review and find faults. It's also hard to give it a positive review. The author has imagined a very thought out world. The detail and description and history and races has been considered and perfected to a very fine point. The authors writing style and quality is fine, and while the side characters are not perfectly fleshed out they are also not generic. The problems only really show because the story development is all over the place and it feels like the author doesn't really know where he wants to take the story. In 300 chapters there is very little to no development or room for improvement. The MC never faces challenges or has any pressure to grow or change. The Author can't seem to decide if he wants a system story or a virtual video game world story. And somehow in both worlds the MC is an omnipotent god. Overall this novel is good to have something on the back burner while you're waiting for other stories with a more fulfilling plot. But if you're looking for something that gets the heart beating and as satisfying and complete arcs go elsewhere.