Killix_Kreed
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading!
this story is ok. but thats it.the concept is nothing new but still rare enough to be interesting. the execution is meh. 10 chapters prologue with some stuff thats relevant, 15 chapters of different pov's that feel like filler. that leaves me with 25 out of the 50 chapters i read with actual mc plot and its bland, the mc is not really memorible. the mc just goes into a dungeon and clears it without trying, he can tame 1000 beasts of c rank and below from the very begining, its boring there is no adventure and no excitement in this adventure story. im actually struggling with the rating for this story. 5 stars is an exceptional story, 4 stars a good story. 3 stars is an ok story, 2 stars not worth wasting your time on and 1 star is trash. this story is not good enough for 3 stars but better then 2 star. so my rating is 2.7 stars.
Tamed beast should be divided in to primary and secondary categories in primary the tamer and beast should get mutual benefits like increase physical or mental health or mana or quickening the process and Secondary beasts are those in whom the tamer imposes its will upon them to make them act as he wished
It's okay? The spelling is absolutely atrocious at some parts so far, the confusion between reality manipulation and illusion is kinda baffling. Maybe it will be improved as author had mentioned somthing about a spoiler? But like if that was the case you should have just changed it in the first place if it would cause such issues.