Bird_Of_Paradise
Okay so the writing quality is very good. As I read I felt as if I could see everything happening in front of my eyes. There are very few gender bender stories that I like and now this is going to be one of them. MC is so lovely. I mean he says 'I can't die. I have to see Yu Yan kids who will be like her.' I don't know whether I should laugh or cry. Good Job author. Lovely story[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great that the story begins with a strong, emotional hook. There is also a nice contrast between the tragical and the lighthearted, sometimes underlined by dialogue that is suitable for real characters that are a bit lost in the melancholy of the life they lead. It is really good that this started out the way it did. Now I apparently have to wait to read more, a shame, since I just got into the story and the concept is intriguing enough that this ➡️ my library
It's pretty good. XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD XD
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong too 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. Follow me for exp ;) 16. Give my exp 'novel' a good review with a reminder and I'll leave you another 5 star ;) 17. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! expexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexpexp