Reviews of The Favored Son of Heaven

Well written. A little wordy at times, but overall a good read. I rarely find a story that can hold my attention for an extended amount of time without me having to put it down for a while.

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~Disclaimers~ • English is not my first language. • Long. Skip to the parts that matter for you • Spoilers are at the end and still very vauge, so i did not check the spoiler box (Please tell me if i need to change it) • I did not finish this novel! I dropped it with around 30 chapters left. ~Writing~ Mostly it's fine, some mistakes here and there, but understandable. My Problem is the fight scenes. They are too long. Fight scenes are supposed to be written as quick as possible. This does not happen here. Even the fights that last for a few seconds, are around 4 long paragraphs. Don't get me started on the metaphores, for example something like this <He looked like a skyrocketing flying eagle and a mad dragon dragon at the same time!> Also the author likes to use Optimus Prime as a comparison. ~Story Development~ Starts very good. Even got me to cry. The romance has a bad start, but gets better, sadly gets worse again. And then it starts to get bad. It's slow and still has some good moments, but it makes story decisions that i hate. Some of these decisions are at the very end ~Character Design~ Can't remember a single character, besides the fact that some are europian. ~World Background~ I think it is good? Can't really say, to be honest. It seems pretty consistent to me. It does an okay job at using the sci-fi element. What bothers me is the fact, that it says continents are no longer seperated, but they are clearly differences. ~Why I dropped~ I dropped because i was getting frustrated. I had started forcing myself to continue with around 200/300 chapters left. Didn't want to feel like I wasted my time reading so far. But then I cried, because i was so done. Maybe i can get myself to finish those 30 chapters in the future. But for now I am done. ~Should you read it~ It is honestly hard to say. But since I had tons of fun in the beginning: Yeah try it! Don't expect a masterpiece and skip parts, if necessary. But please don't force yourself, it isn't worth it. Thanks for Reading. Below are a few story decisions I hate. [Spoiler] • Mentions character, but doesn't show him, so much it gets annoying. • Kills of a character, 100% dead, Mc had his corpse in his arms. 200+ chapters later, turns out character is still alive. • Cripples character, comes back but stronger • Male character gets raped, gets ignored that it happend. • Kills of important Character, for around 10 chapter. • Female character gets raped, shows of her body in front of a ton of people, other character decides that she is "his" woman

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fun read so far. still only half way through but i never get bored reading. overall the story and writing is better then most books in my opinion

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This is definitely amazing the author did a very great job the writing quality t good and the translator did a good job I and will implore you

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I enjoyed this story quite a bit, character development was REALLY good early on but then got accelerated near the end, assuming that the story had to be axed so the ending was rushed. Much better rushed ending compared to some other series regardless. It was a good read.

The start of the story feels nice.. Not too fast but not not too damn slow either but the ending is too rush.. I don't even managed to understand yet the story already end

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Decent novel destroyed by abysmal quality of translation. I've seen multiple chapter starting from half cut words eg. The becomes e, start of chapter is e.... Rather than the. You can wade through these things in free novels but when it is paid then it is absolutely unacceptable as you're not doing fan service or something, it is literally your job to translate properly and you're getting paid for it.

I just read the reviews and i found that many people are saying that mc is op or its a basic plot but i dont think as mc first is not op at all even the best they consider him to be genius and while he is training harder than others if u read it u will know who i am talking about. Also instead of basic plot its not like MC does not do wrong things and doesn't kill people . He does kill people while romance, his family and his own rules r pretty nice and he is not dumb