Great writing, funny, on point. Realistic scenarios, super fun to read. Main critique will be me finding this novel too soon as thereβs not enough chapters for me to read.
Great novel, love the weak to strong aspect. The characters in the novel are well written and the whole story line catches your attention making you wanting more.
Enjoying this book so far and really like the authors other work commanding wind and cloud
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So amazing π wish this book never ends. It is sooooooooooooooooooo interesting that it has me on the edge of my seat whenever I read it ...m.m
This is an amazing novel but its going to be ending soon the world background and story development is good and whats really good about it is that MC has a lot of Martial brothers the story flows smoothly.
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Friendship, action pack storyline, romance, joke, storyline build up, character build up, the hype from every chapter, youβll want more of it as you keep reading
Great story, has good character development and not a obnoxious main character. This story amalgamates the concept of fictional martial arts and traditional martial arts very well.
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TLDR: Recommended with a grain of salt. Translation Quality: 2* cause the translator keeps saying "y'all". Its the most annoying thing ever. Stabilty: 4* cause I've no idea if they're stable or not. Story: 2* cause wtf is a story lol? The only thing here is MC's brother is amazeballs. Character design: Mc's brother is amazeballs man. Also everyone wants to suck MC's big, juicy, throbbing, hard c*ck. Except the cliches. World background: Wtf is world background? Its the future and mc's brother is amazeballs. But its also not the future, but it actually is. I think. More details: 1. The translator keeps using "y'all" for EVERYONE who's saying "you all". This means every piss poor alley cat and every godking ruling a part of the multiverse(this doesnt exist in this novel but you get it) says "y'all" - f'in annoying. 2. MC keeps trying to bet all the time for 100 bucks. 100 bucks this 100 bucks that. It becomes really annoying really f'in fast because its so insanely overused. And its even more annoying once some things happen that author ignores which would stop the MC's need for money. 3. Author is trash. This is his writing formula: step 1) Author writes some dumb ass crap step 2) Author regrets writing some dumb ass crap step 3) Author ignores writing some dumb ass crap step 4) Repeat. To lightly spoil it a little bit just to give you an idea of what I'm talking aboot : At some point MC competes with a bunch of kids at some sports and he has them all bet some tiny cash, like 100 bucks... but doubled! MC wins and all that and tells his insanely rich friend to talk with the kids about not exposing the MC's abilities cause military regulations or whatever. Rich friend talks with kids who are also insanely rich and tricks them into giving him 100 000 bucks total, which the author immediately ignores in the same paragraph it happened and the MC is still f'in broke as fk and keeps saying "100 bucks" every encounter afterwards for the rest of the novel (Just assuming he does, haven't read past ch200). 4. Heavily reflected in the comments section, the author constantly mentioning MC's brother and his achievements makes it seem like the author wants everyone to suck MC's brothers big, juicy, throbbing, hard c*ck. Not even kidding, it literally drove ppl away from the novel. 5. Everyone being interested in and admiring and praising MC all the f'in time is annoying. Although the author gave side characters a bit of personality its all for naught as their only purpose is to praise and admire the MC's big, juicy, throbbing, hard c*ck. Not even kidding. 6. There is no world background whatsoever. Its apparently the future - very far into the future. Everyone uses dollars for currency, speaks in "y'all", they use standard cars, there is advanced tech but not really except the virtual world which is amazeballs as far as advanced tech goes, some stuff against korea ofc, no cultures except chinese even though there are some but not really 7. Due to the heavy use of the virtual world in this novel there are too many names and nicknames and you'll mostly not be able to keep up with who the fk is who and what the fk is what. Its easy to get lost, luckily everyone is so 0-dimensionally praising, admiring and drooling over the mc it doesn't really matter. 8. There is no spoon. I recommend this novel to everyone purely because it's, at the very least, average quality on this site. If you can get past the little things and you're used to skipping a bunch of crap then you'll be able to waste quite some time on this novel.
Very good story. I initially began to read this book due to pure curiosity, but, as time went by and I read more chapters, I fell in love with every aspect of the book.
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