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This is actually good! I like how the system is having mood swings from time to time, it's funny and its interactions with Raven are hilarious. And I like Raven's personality!
What else you expect ? A master piece. Don't waste time on comment section and read the first chapter. [img=coins][img=exp] Worth It. [img=fp][img=faceslap]
It's an interesting read with one of my fav concepts about an author reincarnating into his own novel, its always funny XD. I see that the author is also a fan of the novel's extra and must probably got motivation from it~ keep it up author!
You're novel be like speedrunning. I can't believe it hasn't even been a week since this work started, and it's your first novel on top of that! That just means you're work is really great!
It's your first novel? That's amazing! If you said you were a veteran, I would believe you. Your work is great and I will follow it for future updates!
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its a wonderful story keep up the good work . the characters are amazing. you are doing pretty well as a first timer well done , keep updating am with you till the end
The premise is one thing and the chapters that followed really nailed it! Both storyline and pacing are great. Though there are minor typos, they are really impressive after knowing this is your first book. Keep up the good work!
it's an amazing book! very recommended to accompany my free time haha, i'm waiting for your update, keep going author![img=update][img=recommend]
This story reminded me of one novel that I read long ago, but the author knows how to stand out !! Similar, yet so different π³ Everything is very detailed and well explained, so no one could be confused. ππ» The main lead is funny and the system too.. I wish I had that system in real life too. π This story is really funny, yet captivating. π§ββοΈ A lot of people could relate to the main lead. Well done, author ! Iβm following your updates !! βοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈβοΈ
Amazing..!!! It was absolutely Amazing...πππ You said it was your first work but it's way better than I had imagined. πππ Continue to write more and read more, it will help you a lot. Just keep up the good work. Well done author.ππππ
First of all, Synopsis and Cover : Amazing !!!!!![img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] Keep up the good work Author . A must read for everyone
Interesting story concept with awesome plot! The main character also has a relatable character and that makes it more interesting. Keep it up author! Great work![img=recommend]
I really like this novel, it's well-written, coherent, and coherence, as a newbie, I really felt jealous while reading your work :> The story is interesting and has a room for improvement. I just suggest making the MC more realistic, I mean you would panick, if you transformed into a different world and had a robotic voice talking with you suddenly, but the MC character was pretty calm about it, it's cool and all, but I just suggest you to show more realistic human emotions in the MC. However, you don't have to change anything in the previous chapters. Anyways, it is really a fun novel and I read only 8 chapter as I'm writing this review, it's super fun and I like the POV. I give it a solid 5~
This book is great... The story line is actually amazing and the characters are kinda interesting.... The first chapters captured my attention.
Um, I don't have that really much to say except that you're doing great so please keep updating! I'm reading this everytime I have the time, just things are making me busy, anyway, keep it up author!
Deez novel is nuts! I like it! ππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ Yeah, those aren't nuts, they're eggplants!
Although am not done reading yet it's a nice story, cool character and plot development, waiting to see you do more keep it up author πβ₯οΈβ₯οΈβ₯οΈ
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