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The Evolution of a Goblin to the Peak

Author: DonnEll
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I_Love_Hina
I_Love_HinaLv13

In summary, look at the pic. xDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

zombie_423
zombie_423Lv10

I haven't read it yet that's why it's all three stars but from the description it seems like a book I've read I think it was called Re: Monster from what I remember

Yom125
Yom125Lv11

I greatly enjoy this series. all my fast passes go to seeing how this story progresses and the main character gets stronger. Wording is a little strange in places but forgivable. Greatly enjoy keep up the good work!

Lv11

this story is stale, the description is quite bad and the grammar is very sub-par. i give props to the author for making something they like, but its simply unreadable for me and i was really hoping to enjoy the story.

UnworthyQuester
UnworthyQuesterLv2

Really good, even though the story is kinda being overused already, the story isn't boring. Also i like the fact that each side characters have their own story, except yuko (not that i dislike her but they really force it, like mc is being overreacting about something small). Other than that i think the story progress is kinda slow (not that i hate it though).

Starvation
StarvationLv10

Reveal spoiler

TeraBaapHuMai
TeraBaapHuMaiLv3

starting is really bad....................................................................................................................................

AstuteWanderer
AstuteWandererLv3

It was a great read honestly out of all the novels with MC's having a game-like system this would be a top 5 for me. Mc is strong but not overpowered(I think) and the pacing of the story is great.

King_Drego
King_DregoLv13

I don't understand the negativity towards this novel.The story is great, character development great and lengths of chapter are great. Souta is awesome too. keep up the nice work man.

amiiru
amiiruLv5

It's a good story. It's an action pack story. Although there's a little grammatical error it's still readable. I recommend this one. Good luck to this author, keep it up

TiltedBoarr
TiltedBoarrLv2

160 chapters and no particular background on any character. Also grammar.... I know that in the synopsis there was the warning about bad grammar, but hey, mistaking tenses all the time since chapter 1 is depressing for the reader. System in this story is not anything amazing and world-building doesn't exist. I wonder why this novel has such high reviews. I anticipated and held on reading this story, but even in the volume 4 story had close to zero story development.

micheal_armonda
micheal_armondaLv3

i really enjoyed how the author builds the characters and the world surrounding them , hopefully there is no harem . i rarely like novels with leveling system because it starts feeling like a cultivation novel but this one caught my attention . good job author

Saverius
SaveriusLv15

I discovered this novel 2 months ago and I can't wait to read the next chapters. The characters are excellent, the story is interesting and the background is really good. I recommend this original novel to all the fans of stories with supernatural, fantasy, mmorpg, video games references and protagonist knowing more than the rest of the characters.

Saverius
SaveriusLv15

I discovered this novel browsing through the new releases a few months ago and I can't wait to read the next chapters. The characters are really good, the story is awesome and the background is interesting. I recommend this original novel to all the fans of rpg, excellent protagonist, leveling up, and western fantasy.

skoot_skeet
skoot_skeetLv1

Mc gets a universal item (highest grade or best grade in the world) like 3 chapters in and inside a low rank dungeon, plot armor so strong he prolly can beat goku

BookWorm313
BookWorm313Lv13

As of Chapter 16 Am considering this the introduction Writing Quality: 4/5 There is a few mistakes with the grammer and some missing words. This however does not affect the story majorly as it can be seen what is implied. Stability of Update: 5/5 Just started the web novel. Im unsure with how stable the upload rate is. Giving it a 5 in consideration of it. Story Development: 3/5 The first chapter had decent story development. However, after that the development takes a nose dive as you feel that the story becomes pretty much one dimensional. This is said as the first 16 chapters consists of 3 things. Fighting, leveling up and somehow gaining overpowered items for his level by luck (plot armor). Character Design: 3/5 There is close to no character development in the first 16 chapters. The character design is pretty common in the fact that the main character dies and ends up in a video game world. It is weird that the character does not show any common human traits and completely accepts the fact that he turned into a goblin and might be stuck in a game without any explanation. Most novels like this tend to have a "god" which eases them into the idea of a new reality which would be less stressful as compared to suddenly being thrown into this world. However, this story has a happy go lucky MC which does not care about this fact which makes it wierd. There is also an issue with how they say the MC is the best player in the game with the best technical aspect. The MC in the first fight feels as if he should have fought better. This is with consideration he is supposed to be the best in the world. After that fight he tends to over stat his opponents. Which makes him pretty much one dimensional. World Background: 1/5 There is no world background. In the first 15 chapters there is 0 world development and makes it feel as if he is stuck in a minature sandbox game. At chapter 16 there is a little bit of world development but barely enough to make a decent impact. It would have been nice to have a prolougue with some world development in the form of a game introduction as this would have fleshed out the world background pretty nicely. Others Will continue to read the story and give an update further into the story. Despite the critism in this review I can see that the story has potential in its idea and has been proven that it can be good. For example, RE:MONSTER. There is a similar idea so far. I hope to see further improvements for the story :)

TheLastAuditor
TheLastAuditorLv3

can't say much but it's good to read this and here comes random letters: shdhfhduffjdcjfbduvhrhcjghjgitkrjfjtjtufurufughrjcuvivjvjdhjdjdhdndjcjdj

LRWJONES
LRWJONESLv4

Stable pacing, with lots of characters development and likeable mc who's both ruthless and kind often seeing the world as nothing more than a game which seems to act as a coping mechanism

ericwolf
ericwolfLv13

This review is being given at the end of the first volume so far I'm enjoying the main character though I'm really forward to having more characters. The main character power progression seems to be fine and stable.

Splendora_Gaming
Splendora_GamingLv4

I am totally loving this story so far. Please do not drop this one. I really want to see where you will take this story. I am curious to see whether or not he'll have a love interest. Alice maybe? lol. What will Author-sama do? Only time will tell.