Heavenly Overlord
Heavenly overlord the **** can't you have any ideas to write a novel this is kinda annoying and boring irritating the same topic is repeated three times at the start of novel vk NFL eyes of ra hmm ez hmm hmm ez hmm ez hmm DZ um Tzu um duct SK nd en bf an nd week later is all y'all X SK idk LFOs en el lf SK kHz too seek **** TX all X FL lf dj kg dj who JFK St in dnbdndksksbdjajksbdjidjvfhfjksjsjdjdjsjjejejgghhhhhuuu7hhhhhhuuujjujjjuujj jjjjjjjkiiiikkkkknbfddtghbbvgshsjsjjdjdhrjjdjdjeiskkskekekekekkdkdkekekdkkdkkejebrgtvkfkdhjrjrjthfjdjdjrjjfjfjdjjdjdjdj Jjdjdkdkdkddkf
The first story is good , but when the story goes on , the story is full negativity for the mc , mc going to another place, the girl get caught by other, then he save her, then go another place , then same happen ,the author make mc power up for that kind reason , chapter 115 and im dropping this story
π§sign this almost mess with my dao heart.. it's slow the MC π₯ kind of cliche.. cultavation system π§ bunch of bs π€can't reach the apex . Tbh i trying a thing giving it chances π§but it's too darn upsetting ... I'll try but π€snorrt** don't think this daddy will stand it for too long .. the Dao is long and my life spand is limited
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Ill start with this , EACH CHAPTER , IS A CLIFF HANGER , the author does not literally have any other weapon in his arsenal , this novel would make you puke blood . I read about 10+ Novels on Webnovel.com , this is by far my worst pick . Read 147 Chapters , there has been almost 4 arcs at this point . First Arc was the longest , almost spanning to 80+ Chapters , after that 3 Arcs , of Rinse and repeat . Am not even kidding you , his fiance gets taken away , he works hard to go after her, gets **** on by others , reaches destination gets forced to fight people literally 1 Realm higher than him . Imagine Houtian Level 1 forced to Fight Xiantian Level 5 , Plot Armor pulls him through. AND THIS HAPPENED 3 TIMES IN A ROW , withing 50 chapters . and again , EACH CHAPTER , IS A CLIFF HANGER , that is the worst part of it all.
the story and background development is very good. i read the RAW using google translator upto 160 chapters but the problem is the author somehow repaets the competeion background again and again. hero keeps on participating in one tournment or the other which irritated me a lot and i dropped this novel at chapter 160
Translation quality is around average, a few grammar errors here and there but they are acceptable. However, in the error chapters, the explanations are almost non existent. Basically, they are rushed and based on the assumption that the readers are already cultivation novels fan. The plot and characters are bland and can't get any more generic wuxia/xianxia plot than this. Arrogant people doing arrogant **** with the holy MC's plot armor. It's really not what I would recommend as of ch.17 and the early plot development tells me that the rest of the novel will probably be mediocre as well.
1 star for synopsis. Qidan as always the best summary. Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS* Post *DING! WRITE MORE THAN 140 WORDS*
I have been a fan of this novel and consider it the best novel out there by far and I have been reading since 2015. The first few chapters are your typical clichΓ© novel but later in the novel there is a lot of characte development for the MC and the world building and power systems become better and better. Itβs like you directly see the author polishing a stone until it turns into a perfectly shaped diamond. Anyone refusing the dig further is afraid of touching gold. This is my first and probably last review of a novel, as I deem almost all of them as not worthy to talk about. All in all an amazing read and I canβt wait to catch up to the ending. Give it a try and you wonβt be disappointed.
I love the story At first it was not that interesting but with the character development and the story line which makes you have a better and greater understanding of the story. Its amazing as everyday I wait in anticipation for the next translated chapter But its a pity that i can't read Chinese no matter how I love Chinese novelsπ₯ Its a great work worth your time