Darkswan
An interesting piece of work to say the least. The book follows your typical kingdom princess trope but adds a twist of the supernatural to it. The author is very creative in the portrayal of different scenes and has wonderfully given life to many of the characters. Though if there is one thing that requires a bit of attention are a few grammatical errors here and there, although don't get me wrong the book is still wonderful to read and is quite enjoyable. Of course, the book is still in its infancy and I'm sure the novel will get better as time passes. Keep up the good work author, I highly recommend this novel, I cant wait to see what will become of the princess and her werewolf stalker bodygaurd.
The plot is very interesting. I like the idea of a wolf picking out his luna and then pursuing her to the end no matter how difficult it can get. By the third chapter, I can feel that he seems to not like her very much, and she seems to not like him very much either. Is there a reason why he feels as if he needs to continue to pursue someone that he does not have good chemistry with and don't have much feelings for? Why did he choose her if he doesn't really like her? Perhaps there's a hidden reason that is not apparent within the first few chapters. Keep writing author. I look forward to more of your story. 😊
The story is actually really great besides that one sentence that sounded like her whole world was fake in the first chapter. It seemed like the the story wasn't 1st POV but if your going for the 3rd POV that's fine. It think it would be better in 1st person since most stories are like that and we would readers would get a deeper feelings for the MC