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Reviews of The Devilish Charm of the alpha

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The Devilish Charm of the alpha

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Mennely_Mentoor_9373
Mennely_Mentoor_9373Lv11Mennely_Mentoor_9373

love the book will recommend it to someone who love wolf and overbearing alpha stories.. they just have to get over themselves and admit their feelings for each other

The_Procrastinator
The_ProcrastinatorLv4The_Procrastinator

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thecatdude
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LordofKaizen
LordofKaizenLv10LordofKaizen

An interesting piece of work to say the least. The book follows your typical kingdom princess trope but adds a twist of the supernatural to it. The author is very creative in the portrayal of different scenes and has wonderfully given life to many of the characters. Though if there is one thing that requires a bit of attention are a few grammatical errors here and there, although don't get me wrong the book is still wonderful to read and is quite enjoyable. Of course, the book is still in its infancy and I'm sure the novel will get better as time passes. Keep up the good work author, I highly recommend this novel, I cant wait to see what will become of the princess and her werewolf stalker bodygaurd.

DaoistOwKOrc
DaoistOwKOrcLv1DaoistOwKOrc

This book is nice and I’m going to read it till the end . I just hope it have a happy ending. ❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

Mary_Algen_Guiang1
Mary_Algen_Guiang1Lv13Mary_Algen_Guiang1

Ahhhhh! absolutely in love with the story! an alpha with possessive tendencies is just my type! I can't wait to read more! You are awesome author-san!

Elle_Lynn
Elle_LynnLv10Elle_Lynn

I really like this story of the wolf picking its princess and I keep wondering what will happen. Love how the mystery starts ar the very beginning and I can’t wait to read more x

SerafinaF
SerafinaFLv13SerafinaF

The plot is very interesting. I like the idea of a wolf picking out his luna and then pursuing her to the end no matter how difficult it can get. By the third chapter, I can feel that he seems to not like her very much, and she seems to not like him very much either. Is there a reason why he feels as if he needs to continue to pursue someone that he does not have good chemistry with and don't have much feelings for? Why did he choose her if he doesn't really like her? Perhaps there's a hidden reason that is not apparent within the first few chapters. Keep writing author. I look forward to more of your story. 😊

Lizabelle88
Lizabelle88Lv5Lizabelle88

The novel is entertaining, amusing and the main characters are engaged in some kind of 'hating each other kind of relationship from the start. I hope to see more of the character development in the future chapters. Well done Author for creating an entertaining and amusing novel! Keep it up!

zz_K
zz_KLv1zz_K

I don't really read much books but I stopped by and the concept of this one is really great I like the fact that the princess and the werewolf does not like each other at first, there is conflict, difference of opinion, unlike other werewolves book, great work. Nicely done.

Samerah_Kassim
Samerah_KassimLv1Samerah_Kassim

Okay sis, so far so good, i see you have written it in third person POV which is great, I love the story so far, it is well written and has an amazing plot, lol i love the princess stalker werewolf bodyguard, this is an original for sure and i hope to read more.

Bit_Lucky
Bit_LuckyLv4Bit_Lucky

The story is actually really great besides that one sentence that sounded like her whole world was fake in the first chapter. It seemed like the the story wasn't 1st POV but if your going for the 3rd POV that's fine. It think it would be better in 1st person since most stories are like that and we would readers would get a deeper feelings for the MC

kidd17
kidd17Lv1kidd17

you have good writing commercial, and i hope you put name into the character, but i wanted to see more! you can using name generator if you try to search some names

Jephthah_
Jephthah_Lv2Jephthah_

In fact, it's a masterpiece. Nice storyline, nice concept, nice grammar, nice world-building. Stop reading my review and go read the book, you won't regret it.

MichelleLeeee
MichelleLeeeeLv3MichelleLeeee

Wow, this novel entertaining and you could also see what the plot, characters, and world is like within the first 5 chaps! Author does a good job letting us know what to expect for each chapters! Well done author! Good luck and keep up your hard work!

FL_God
FL_GodLv1FL_God

Its a nice read about werewolves though the writting and emotions r rather abrupt. the transition and dialogues r ackward as well. i felt that author is rushing her ideas and it shows upon the chracters and flow. overall it was a good read ^^ keep writting! [img=recommend]