Well, as I greatly enjoyed this read and eagerly await more chapters I shall give a review. Mind you, I shall give a unbiased (as much as possible) review with praise and critique where it is due.
Let's start this like the star scores.
Writing quality: Sometimes a minor weird thing pops up here and there as far as i can remember. Yet there is never a disruption in the reading flow, nor did it ever bother me. That pretty much means if there are flaws they are minor and just noticable if one looks for them. As such the quality gets a 4/5. Besides that one should remember it is an original story.
Stability of updates: Here I can say very little as I started and finished reading what is there within a single day. So I shall temporarily give this an average 3/5 for now till further observation. (Yes i am stalking this novel like crazy)
Story Developement: The story is very interesting yet a bit strange. How should I put it? The story does develope nicely, the pacing is good and the flow is well. Things are explained well enough and depicted good. Yet somehow it feels much easier to read then some other novels do. It is a much relaxing thing to read and does not evoke the thought of something being out of place. Basically what I am trying to say is that the story develelopement is going well up to this point. As thus 4/5 stars.
Character Design: Welllll~ thats some crazy **** right there. You know when life gets hard and gets to you, and you be just like meh I don't give a fluff anymore? Thats how it feels with the characters. That is not meant in a bad way though. The characters are all different and for once, for tis one story there is no character I don't like. They all are written excellently and fulfill their roles and personalities as they should. There are no slipups on the behavioural pattern they should have due to their character. As such this gets a lot of praise from me, besides that even if very very slowly there is character growth and change. I like that it happens this slowly without changing anything major, staying true to how the characters should be and behave. As such I shall give my first 5/5 rating ever. But then again, it may just be that all those characters just fit my personality so damn well. And I just must love them to bits.
World Background: Here we are, the last of the categories to rate. Lets see... This story takes its time to explain its world, yet it is not done in a bad way like several other stories do. There is neither an info dump nor is there to little. Mostly what has to be known is introduced plus some trivia and tidbits left and right along the way. As such you never really feel lost about the world, nor are you overindulged in knowledge. So it always leaves you with something new to learn or wanting to know. The pacing of explanations is nice as well so it gets a 4/5 from me. That means there may be a little to improve here and there, but by no means is it lacking anything. Its like a delicious dinner, yet it could be that tad bit better if something else was added. Nothing has to change but there is room for growth is what I am trying to say :3
Afterword: Damn me I love the crazy in that story, I love the interaction between the characters so so much as it flows and feels natural. Their behaviour and actions are awesome. By no means are they perfect characters, they all have their flaws and own weirdness but that is what makes them so awesome and lovable. Putting all that crazy and weird into a single place creates a beautiful thing which made me drop legit tears from laughing so hard.
Sincerely Feyr~
