The Demon Monarch System

story line is interesting... writing style is neat too... world background still have some holes on it but I am writing this review on teh basis of first 36 chapters... but overall book is worth reading for[img=recommend][img=recommend]

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Stability of updates : obviously it's very good. Character design : Much development here for our MC i'm really satisfied, characters feel like living being, they're interesting and deep. Story development : That's personnal here, but i really like the flow of this story, fast or slow when it need to be. World background : Flourishing world.

I really love this book, I think it's an awesome novel author cause most of the things in it seem well thought out so I must ask when are you resuming it

It's fine overall because it alternates between good and bad. The exact quality varies a lot, I think in part because the author revises older chapters sometimes. Presumably the more edited ones generally are the better ones? That would be great... except that due to the partial edits, there are a lot of continuity errors. They're not major problems, just little details, but there are a lot of them and it's frustrating. In the worst chapters, there are stiff and juvenile conversations repeating info already discussed as if it's the first time, which makes the main character seem like an airhead. However, in the best chapters, the writing quality is good; the dialogue and plot move along at an entertaining pace and there are good lines and scenes. In good chapters, the main character is clever and opinionated and ruthless. The biggest problem overall is there are a lot of filler/useless chapters. The author has a bad habit of drawing something out for many, many chapters. Like walking to a room and sitting down will take 3 chapters, and that's literally all that's happening. Or 30 chapters of buildup for a fight and then it ends in an anti-climax. Pacing issues like that are a weakness of web novels, but if I were reading this as it was released... yikes.

I hold out hope you will pick this story back up I love the world building and character development. I hope you haven't dropped this all together.

Overall great book!! It starts slow but it get really Interesting. The charac ters are well thought out and provide some funny relief to the prota gonist. But it sucks they stopped adding to the book and we won’ know what happens next😤😤😤

I really like this story. I had to force myself to stop reading because I like to binge read. So, I'm at about 502 chapters in. I love this, the story building and characters have so much depth that I just fell in love with it. I really hope the author doesn't drop it though. I really like it.

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Hey there. I've been reading this author's web novel since around the 80+ chapter mark and I've decided it's time to finally write a review. The author is simply amazing. Not only does he take an incredible amount of care making sure his web novel is consistent, but he puts forth an absurd amount of effort. I remember a while back someone close to him passed away, yet he hardly took much time away to grieve to continue his writing. I hope this work picks up steam again like it did before the travesty hit because he's earned it. I only hope the author's next work heads on over to Patreon so he can get a bigger cut.

This is a great novel to read! Concept is amazing and MC aint too OP too quick! Explained quite well! Thank you author for the novel! Excited for upcoming chaps!

great story, great characters, very well written, the only issue I have is the chapter releases are inconsistent and the privilege is way to expensive for a book that is this inconsistent with chapter releases, i recommend not trying to follow the book daily or weekly but every couple months binge reading it

Give more please I can't stop reading. The characters have depth and the world doesn't revolve around just the mc giving it a fuller feeling. The chapters are a perfect length and there are no noticeable errors that ruin your experience!

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Great novel. I like the Ruthless mc, the story ,and the world devetopment. ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

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Foi bem desenvolvido a historia, o personagens tem ótimos designs. E o plano de fundo em bem claro. No mais eu gostei muito, me proporcionou uma maravilhosa leitura.

the start is good and i like how this story goes. some hint of evil mc, i want it hahaha tho it would ruin if mc is stupid, just hoping he's not

This is good stuff give it a try