Read the first 10 chapters and it's been good fun! Of course at this point our heroine is still a scared bunny rabbit, but it makes you excited to see her journey to becoming a cool tigress shown in the image. Lols The writing is also good even if there were a few mistakes (tho very minimal), and it doesn't take away from reading. Kudos!
Overall the story is very nice and you connect with the female lead through her pain and her feeling like she didn't belong. I liked the fact that its avatarish and it explores the possibility of another world. The aspect of suspense is in plenty. Good work, author. Don't miss out on this amazing book!
To be honest, the storyline is good but the story itself needs some editing. Though the first few paragraphs were going fine until it snapped. There are some grammatical errors present. Some of the context were quite difficult to understand. The instances are not the least convincing. One min you are describing a particular scene and the next min it's something else. I suggest you run it on an editing app and also read through it. Keep up the good work.