Reviews of The Cost of Immortality.

Hi everyone!! I am making a *Modest review* of my own work. XD This book will have quite a slow start as I try to improve as a writer and explain the world the best I can. I have been planning the rules and system the world has to follow and it is going to take a while to explain everything. Anyway please comment if you like the novel so far, any and all advise on how to better my writing and story will be much appreciated!! Thanks and Kind Regards!! JustGo

I really like the topic of him destroying the world internally rather than like world domination rather than those other novels it's just world domination, harem, pleasure and opness total bs well for those who like stuff well I can't do anything about it. I like the world building, real world problems and our little mc. I hate the time skips and the fight scenes ha the worded fight scenes. Well I'm loving the novel so far hope you don't drop it. (I hate reviewing cause I get so technical don't know the right words to say but meh keep doing a good job for us webbers swinging through the metropolis of web books to defeat the overlord degenerates the harem lovers) That was completely necessary I so pledge my heart to the Anti-harem sect.

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Going good so far!! It is quite different to most things I have read, so the change is nice. Please keep it up and don't drop 🙏 [img=recommend]

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this is a great story that keeps you wanting to read more(at least for me) it's a little fast or slow at times but I think it needs that at those times. MC ain't over powered were most other novels does that. I personally I prefer the MC to learn from his mistakes. and not be a goody too shoes because that does get boring fast. In the end I think this is a good novel over all

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I have not found many errors in your work so far, it was great reading these first 34 chapters, it gave me a great outline of the story. I would love to see the rest of this story.

I really like this book mostly because of the magic system and how long the novel can go on for. Like he could die on his current body and have to start over again, or he can destroy the world and go on to another world and repeat over and over again.

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