The Celestial Empire

This actually was captivating me from the beginning, the world is just interesting enough to make me enjoy the ideas of it quite a bit, and the story surrounding it seems quite interesting as well. Writing quality is pretty good and overall, this seems good! Keep up the work!

An Exquisite World with lively characters, a real treat for fans of the Romance Fantasy Genre! It will keep you glued to your screen :D[img=update][img=recommend]

A very nice read so far! I loke the genre and the plot is good. Tge characters were interesting as well. Keep the chapters coming! Great work so far

This book genre wasn't my cup of a tea. But this one is blew my mind. Despite that, there are several mistakes I've found where you could fix it: 1. Lengthy info-dumps. 2. Lengthy paragraph where you should split the long one into 2. 3. Several grammar mistakes Only if you fix these problems, I have a good faith that this book have a potential to get contracted.

nice story and interesting characters and world background

I love the way author has used sun and mooon and also the writing style is good. The background is well explained and it shows how hard the author has worked to write this book. nice read!!