LaurelEvermore
Very interesting story. I can tell that the author has drawn inspiration from other works and there is not anything wrong with that. The characters are well developed and the plot can be a bit confusing at times, but I assume it will tie together at the end. However, despite these minor flaws, what follows is a wonderful reading of a very enjoyable story line.
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The story is interesting and has potential, but the mc is just so stupid and quite frankly ruins the novel. All she does is complain about her situation, but she does absolutely nothing to change it; she's all bark and no bite and that has been going on since chapter one. Of all the characters, she's the least interesting one and that's a problem since she's the mc.
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