Reviews of The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers

Gritty in its realism (past darkness, soulful regrets, and necessity of working through personal & relationship problems)...intertwined with ethereal elements and lofty romantic story threads...

The plot itself feels well thought out as the story progresses; however, there are times when reading the story becomes obstructed by bad grammar and repetitive phrasing. I just ask that the author stop using the word “moreover”. This single word is used at least twice in every chapter that I have read so far. Considering the fact that “moreover” is not a transitioning word commonly used when speaking, its continuous use feels incredibly out of place. Especially when such an old word is being used consistently by a seventeen year old girl. There are many more phrasing and grammatical errors that could be pointed out but this one is the most common. I do like the plot and would one hundred percent recommend.

This is sooo good! I'm hooked, and very invested reading your novel that I forgot about giving it a review, sorry. 😅 I like how the MC portrays what she's feeling throughout the chapters! [img=recommend][img=recommend] It is definitely a must read and I'll try to support your novel a much as possible! Good luck writing!

I LOVE IT!! 😍😍 Before I realized, I already reached chapter 40, lol. I have always had a soft corner for stories related to overprotective brothers protecting their beloved sister and this book just fell right in. I love everything..I could relate to her pain..how hard life was for her and how careful the brothers were. I love everything in it including your Author notes. Kudos to you, author-sama. your book is perfectly safe in my library ❤️❤️

Hum, I've nothing to say, really. Although I did spot a little wording issue, but... it's almost visible to those who aren't searching for it. So, all in all, great stuff. Keep up the good work author! PS: I loved your A/N.

Whoa! The book is really amazing and it gives you an urge to continue more. The synopsis is well-written as well. Good job, author! Like it a lot!

It's a solid story that deserves a good read. There are no issues with grammar or writing and the quality is top-notch, the story so far is interesting and the the characters, especially, intrigue me and keep me looking forward for more! The world background is conventional but has been executed well. Keep up the great work, author!

This is absolutely perfect 🤩. The character development, the world background and the writing ability is top notch. I love how the author is able to create this roller coaster of emotions. This is a work well done, author👍👍👍 Really beautiful .

I love the book so much💗💗💗. I couldn't stop reading, unfortunately had to stop when I got to the privilege chapters and this have anymore fast pass. Great work author. I adore you💞

I really love the fate of the main character! I locked my eyes at her at everythig she does (not in a creepy way) since the story was very engaging! Also, the cover looks amazing! Kudos for the author! I cannot wait to read more about your novel!

Whenever I'm reading a web novel the first time I check is character development, and this catches my attention. Each character has a strong personality that makes you want to know them better as the story goes. Well written! I love how the way you wrote your author's note and congratulation for having a million views in your story, it deserves it!

I give a rating of five star because this book deserve it, I really don't know what's inside the authors mind to have wrote something this good. Everything is good from the writing, the plot, and even the continuous progress in every Chapter. Good work!

The story is good and interesting. I like that the author does not make all the brothers dote on their sister which is actually what's normal in reality.

If you want to get away from typical Fl stories of revenge and love and reborn etcetc . This book is just right for you . For me this novel was refreshing...especially the great sibling love and support shown throughout the story . The way Emily fight with her demons. The support of her brothers . It really give you a glimpse of reality of those ppl who suffer from trauma...her insecurity , her doubts, her fear , everything. well everything about this novel is amazing ...and I wish luck for author to do her best ❤❤

Very well written and extremely interesting! It wasn't what I was expecting, but I was pleasantly surprised. The entire world has an air of mystery that intrigues, while the characters make me care and want to stay involved. I feel like this story just needs a little polish - mainly minor editing/consistency fixes - and it would be be ready for bookshelf publishing. I'm looking forward to how this story unfolds!

So far, the synopsis is already this interesting and captivating! This is the first for me to indulge in this type of novel so I cannot wait to read this! The gif below is my expression when I read the synopsis.

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LOVE THIS NOVEL! The author is best in her work.. for me this novel brings myself to question about the things going on in my life.. it gives a sense of peace and at the same time to see things in different perspective... I love the writing, I love the background, I love the characters... Keep up the good work Author [img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap][img=faceslap]

This is a very wonderful story. The plot, the description, every single thing about it is captivating . The characters are easily relatable. I totally recommend this .

What a nice story accompanied by nice characters. They were fleshed out and felt like actual living beings. The narration was superb and niche. I will wait for more chapters and was looking forward to its success upon reaching a million views. Kudos and Peace ✌️