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The Broken Angel & Her Overprotective Brothers

Nightsummer20

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NOgnaras
NOgnarasLv5NOgnaras

Interesting. So far everything is looking good. After reading the plot, it is exactly like the story I've been dreaming of reading. There's not much to go by right now since the story is just starting and barely a day goes by since her coming to the house. I'm really looking forward to how this story is heading. She claimed that she's broken and distrustful of people's nice façade, afraid that all the niceties turn into abuse but after receiving even a little bit of nice treatment from the brothers, she was quick to be all smiles and hopeful. It was a bit contradictory imo. This story has a big potential, I really hope the author will never drop it.

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Nightsummer20
Nightsummer20AuthorNightsummer20

Hello everyone, this is your author and I'm here to make some important points clear about this story: 1. The female lead has gone through a lot and the level of her self-confidence is almost zero during the first seventy or eighty chapters. But worry not! She will learn to fight with her demons and will become a very powerful and strong lead as the story will progress. 2. There's no guarantee that you will fall in love with the characters of the brothers immediately. None of the brothers is perfect and they have their own share of past and difficulties. Not all of them will shower the fl, their little sister, in love and warmth from the very beginning. Even though they care about her but it will take time before they will finally appear as the perfect loving and caring brothers. 3. The brothers have a reason for the way they behave towards the fl. Not all their reasons are perfect or sensible reasons but the most important one of them is that they all want to protect their little sister at all cost, even if it means that they will need to be strict with her. 4. This is totally normal that not everyone is going to like this story and I'm completely fine with it. Just make sure to not leave any hate comments. You can always find something better and worthy enough to read. 5. I'll try my best to edit the chapters before uploading them but if you find any silly mistakes, then please kindly point them out. I'll edit them immediately. 6. Your votes, comments, and reviews are more than welcome and so are your suggestions. I hope you guys will enjoy the story! Happy Reading! :)

Ammie_Kinyon
Ammie_KinyonLv14Ammie_Kinyon

Such AMAZING and REALISTIC character development...each main character with his/her own individual complex personalities--past/backstory, strengths, weaknesses, flaws, virtues, vices, secrets, wounds, warts, and all! With every chapter a work of art! I am continually astounded that such a talented young author can still possibly have such a full, deep, even agonizing insight into the "human" condition. . . especially the darkest side of evil where angels fear to tread! As a 51 y/o woman who served in the U.S. Marines, I so relate to the utter, shattered, brokenness of Emily. And returning home to family expecting me to be my "old self"... NOT expecting the screaming night terrors; gut-wrenching fear of cruel, vicious men; loss of my sense of self (don't know who I am anymore...I just know I can NEVER be who I WAS)! I have LOST myself in your exquisite storytelling and blossoming novel! Even shedding renewed hope and inspiration to put the broken, bloody pieces back together in my own life. And perhaps even find love, as well... I could easily savor 10+ chapters every day--but I KNOW the CREATIVE PROCESS is so complex and draining, especially when done diligently. Keep up the spectacular work!!!

Silverstar7
Silverstar7Lv3Silverstar7

I'm reading all the stories of this author at the moment and she really is good when it comes to writing a novel. I love her style and the way she builds the story. This book is a little bit different from the other ones based on that this is actually a **** fiction with a touch of the mafia. Unlike her other two stories, there's no hint of fantasy in it. The quotes and author notes are really good and they give you inspiration. I'll probably update this review in the future after reading more chapters and having a good grasp of the story but right now I'm looking forward to dive deeper in it.

_midnightsunshine_
_midnightsunshine_Lv10_midnightsunshine_

The quality of writing is great and you can actually feel what Emily might be going through. And who wouldn't want to read a story with six male leads? xd I'm curious to see where this story goes. For the first few chapters, nice start. Good luck!

DaFox_Aholic
DaFox_AholicLv10DaFox_Aholic

This is so good! I'm up to chapter 74 so far. The writing quality is amazing with an interesting plot. Thank you so much author! By far one of the best I'veread on this app[img=recommend]

gauri_tm
gauri_tmLv2gauri_tm

awesome! !author the story is super addictive to me. I like the plot very much and the characters are quite interesting as well. I just hope you won't leave the storyline and complete the whole novel. I support youπŸ‘πŸ»πŸ‘πŸ»we all doπŸ™ƒgood luck

Riyah404
Riyah404Lv4Riyah404

I've read up to chapter twelve. This story feels warm. The author's note at the end of each chapter adds more warmth to the story. Maybe the author could let us peek at the past of Emily with bits of flashbacks so we can see or get a glimpse of how broken she had become. Needs a bit of improvement in grammars. But all in all, I like the warmth in this story. Hope that Emily's brothers can patch up her broken pieces and maybe Emily can do the same for her brothers. They also seem problematic., XD

MandyBuchner23
MandyBuchner23Lv10MandyBuchner23

Okay, this book will an emotional roller coaster ride. I can feel it through my bones. So far, i found out what the FL went through but i know that’s just the tip of the iceberg. Im dying of curiosity! I wanna know more and thank you author for releasing this but please updateπŸ₯ΊBut this novel is really good!🀍🀩

lone_flower
lone_flowerLv4lone_flower

I so badly want to read this novel...........❀️❀️❀️.......my one of the favourite genre-overprotective brothers ...... looking forward to reading it

7Reasons
7ReasonsLv37Reasons

I'm liking the plot. I have read a few stories based on this same theme and even though I'm also more of a contemporary romance and fantasy lover, this particular topic has caught my interest. The starting is actually good. Emily's broken self is visible clearly. I'm sure we will soon see her rebellious side too, after all, she's a teenager! Moreover, I like this author's writing style. Night always tries to mix unexpected plots and twists. Looking forward to dive deep into this story! :)

Drapetomaniac12
Drapetomaniac12Lv4Drapetomaniac12

Yay, I'm the first one to review this book. The story is flowing smoothly and it's well written. I'd love to see how the story progresses in the future :) There were a few grammatical errors so I suggest you to proofread the book once. Also, in the start, all of the quotes lack a period at the end. I love the author's notes at the ends. They can brighten anyone's day. Thank you for writing this book ❀️ Keep writing, author!

Lavvy
LavvyLv3Lavvy

Reviewing this book after reading the first couple of chapters! Ah, this is my first time reading a story so full of angst! I won't say that I loved the angst, but somehow I could not help reading more about this broken angel. I feel that Emilia's personality can be an inspiration for many people who have to go through various misfortunes in their life. After all, life is unfair! I love how Emilia remains kind and understanding even after going so much! The writing too doesn't feel sharp and abrupt, it flows smoothly! Even after knowing that it'll be a rollercoaster of emotions, I'll continue reading to cheer for Emilia! Loved where the story is going!

jafr86
jafr86Lv15jafr86

This review is a little hard for me because its not the type of story I normally read however I did find this novel strangely uplifting. The main character already hit her lowest point by the time the story begins and the book shows her realistic struggle to get better with all the triumphs and backslides that come along with it because as the novel shows a child that only knows abuse can not just switch there instincts from survival to love at a drop of a dime. I found the foot notes at the end of the first group of chapters to be inspiring and worth reading the book just for them.

Mimky
MimkyLv12Mimky

I had just found this hidden gem through rummaging through all the other novels, searching for one to read. From the very first chapter, I was already hooked. The use of language and the style of writing is πŸ‘ŒπŸ»πŸ‘ŒπŸ». Although I have a few assasments pending and works that I need to submit very soon, I just could not not stop myself from reading and find out what's next. I had caught up to the latest chapters in just one long sitting, and let me tell you, it was worth it. πŸ’›πŸ’›πŸ’› I would definitely recommend, it is worth your time and space in your library. 🧑🧑🧑

JungleJerri
JungleJerriLv15JungleJerri

I really like this new story! It's shaping up to be a gritty piece which is always enjoyable. I really like the main character so far. I can tell this is going to be a very intriguing story. I'm ten chapters in at this point and I'm really looking forward to how it develops. I highly recommend this novel!

Robin_Stanovic
Robin_StanovicLv13Robin_Stanovic

Very good so far. This gives a good fantasy and modern workd background mixed together. I like how this book incorporates the relationship with each brother. It gives a realistic view on whats its like to have siblings.

Senpai_God
Senpai_GodLv3Senpai_God

Don’t bother with this one, The author starts with explaining how she has a dark and painful past and that she has been through a lot, but as soon as she meets her brothers she is shy and doesn’t know how to act, she cries all the time. Like ALL the time. Then when she later meets who is most likely the Male lead she just stares at him as if enchanted by his looks and then later get’s embarrased, typical beta girl behavior. The author portrays her as a girl with a sad and dark past but she just comes out as a weak female who doesn’t know anything else than cry. You would think she got some level of pain recistance since the author talks about her getting tortured and her bones breaking and getting whipped but noooo, as soon as someone pushes her she just starts crying, screaming and runs away like a wuss

cookiefan22
cookiefan22Lv13cookiefan22

This is a very interesting story with a plot that hooked me immediately! I really lime the characters so far!! πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ‘πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ˜πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—πŸ’–πŸ’—

CHELSEA_MOHAMMED
CHELSEA_MOHAMMEDLv1CHELSEA_MOHAMMED

I love this story even though the fl had a bad past and she is afraid of being hurt and abandoned.Her brothers who seem cold at first started opening up to her and treating her like a sister. I LOVE IT[img=recommend]