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The Born Of General

It is my first Novel, and English is not my first language(sorry for grammar issue).

SupremeGun · Fantasy
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8 Chs

CHAPTER 1: Blank Space

Somewhere in Void Realm

( 3rd POV )

Mc: Hmm, who the fuck is that old man. Why am I here? Well, nevermind I am going to ask that old man.

Mc: Oh, hello old man. Where are we? Why everything here is dark and glommy?

Old man: Hmm, interesting. How is it possible for a mortal to survive especially talk to me?

Mc: Ha, What do you mean old man?

Old man: Actually, this is a place where O##G## lives.

Mc: What do you say, old man? Are you kidding me?

Old man: Well, it is up to you to believe it or not. I am not going to force you.

Mc: Ahh, old man. Why my body is starting to fade?

Old man look at an Mc like a "you should already a long time ago"

Old man: Hey kid, I have an offer? Do you want to hear?

Mc: What? Quickly tell me. What do you want?

Old man: OK kid, I will give you a system called " Blank Space " and let you explore to universe.

Mc: What is your condition? A quickly old man I am going to fade away soon.

Old man: What you need to do is help me create energy called " Hiatus " and you will know the deeper information when you get stronger. Do you accept my offer? or Die like a mortal and go to Recarnation as another does.

Mc: ok ok, I accept. What do i need to do next?

Old man: Close your eyes, count 1 to 10, and your soul will fad to the next world. Happy to talk to you kid.

Mc: Thank you and may I know your name, old man?

Old man: Zenos

Mc start to look at old man last time and his soul start to fade away.

( 3rd POV End )

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