Eggcellent
Fking love it..the lore, the story everything some requests? -put an aux chp explaining the magic/fight/skill/power levels -also the mother,,,she seems somewhat useless, like she wasnt there when MC or the dad was almost killed, IDK make it seem like she cares for em..[ her sending elven soldier was fine but dosnt seem that special...the potion was fine but my point is show moments of her doing **** that shows she love em...get what I mean?] -if..IF u do romance, dont do it like warlock of magus..its was shallow and had useless chicks and a cold MC....or separation..dont do it..make lovers useful and u know be loyal and help MC and ****..though no romance is also fine I guess anyway GL..love this **** **: always, if romance.. no moms or wives
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