TimVic
I'm usually a silent and low-key reader, but I just had to review this. It's so enthralling. Just recently joined Webnovel on recommendation and on recommendation I read your other novel and was so mesmerized. I saw u had another novel and decided to check this out. And Omg! Keep it up bro. I wanna see the end of this✌✌
I love the story and I love Gustav's character. the only question I have is to plz change gustav's love interest to miss aimee cuz I would love to see more of their interactions and personally I think she is the only one who suits him. or introduce a new female lead who is just as ruthless as gustav cuz angy really doesn't suit him that well.
So I’ll start with writing quality The story is well written there is no confusion, and if there are doubts it will be cleared in the next chapter it’ll be fine Now I’ll talk about Updating stablity i could have given 10 stars if you ask me thats how good the update stablity is Then lets go On with plot development , character design and world background i’ll try to abstain from spoilers so the Mc is not too ruthless or too soft hearted he is just right In the middle And Its nice to see him that way there is a good amount of face slapping (dont Compare it to chinease novel’s face slapping this novels faceslapping is good) The world development is good there are not too much fillers The world background is moderN setting with monsters roaming around and the people have powers And the world judge you based on your power rank
I just really enjoy this book, i wish it would update more often though. truth be told I wouldnt have started this book if I wasnt bored looking for a quick read. most of the times I dont read books with so few chapters. But if this book were to Get a hIgher chapter count I guarantee It would blow up from popularity
Need more chapters for exact review. The character design is pretty good up until now. It's good to see character development. Hope he doesn't become a simp again. Also, tell me that the romance part isn't going to be anytime soon. I also want to know if the mc can copy or steal the ability from others? There aren't many chapters for writing on story development and world background. Keep up the good work.☺
I haven't read it yet but just want to make sure the author doesn't drop it. So many promising novels get dropped due to not getting the attention they deserve😔 Will read when it reaches 180+ since when I start I don't finish until I'm either broke or out of chapters🥴 See you in a couple weeks fellow readers🥳
Let us begin with how the story is great, it draws you in immediately out of curiosity, then over time as it just becomes interesting and fun how the development continues. There is the slight problem of many grammatical errors which do make some parts a little weird when reading, however does not effect the story overall. The character design is better than most. (I personally like heartless characters, sadly this one is not quite there.) Anyway aside from my personal feelings as mentioned in quotations, Gustav's development is progressing pretty well. Keep in mind this is only up to chapter 55, I will wright another review later with more depth. Enjoy everyone.
It seems that there hasn't been any new proper reviews recently so I will leave one. First of all the beginning is ridiculously splendid! The parents of Gustav is unrealistically cruel but it is a plus for me. It gives Gustav his cold behavior and need to get stronger. The way he improves is quite nicely written... there is a very clean and cleat character development thought the story. The side characters are also well written especially Angy and E.E. Every character is realistic and has goals in there life which they are not quite obsessed over fulfilling except Gustav because of his system. Alright, lets talk about the system. The system is the pedestal that allowed him to work hard and strike gold. Honestly this is almost the whole story in simple words, "This is ten percent luck Twenty percent skill Fifteen percent concentrated power of will Five percent pleasure Fifty percent pain And a hundred percent reason to remember the name" The only complain I have with Gustav is he isn't kind... You can be kind and cold at the same time. Take notes from the system novel that started it all and the system manwha that ended 2 days ago, Solo Leveling. Jin woo is kind but Gustav is not, he is ruthless. I wished Gustav was more kind to people. He is only kind to people who help him. that way of thinking is kind of restricted. But this is my fav WN for sure. If there is anyone who is looking to read a WN I recommend this and you want be disappointed! Keep up the good work TimVic![img=fp]