Iβm kinda surprised about the fast release speed of the chapters a change of pace compared to the 10 chapters then hiatus for a year Anyway story starts out a little rough but becomes better after a few chapters, the story is mediocre, but quite interesting, pretty good read If you need a break between all the other garbage
It is awesome
saw this on trending with a high rating so i decided to read it. i found this story highly chaotic. instead of developing the line of story with forethought and planning i have a feeling that author just added random scenes as they came to him. MC seems like just immature teenager who got system and not earths top general who was in war for years.
The story and writing quality is good overall the only problem is the fact that the author can't write romance for shd and he should stay far away from it unlike what he's doing now, the whole sima ying thing was ass and completely rushed not to mention none of us wholesome readers ever read this crap for **** scenes when we can just go look that up online, if he can rework or take out the terrible romance and scrap the **** scenes we can actually have a 20% better story
Lods. Congrats amaziiing. di ka na ma reach lods. sana wag mo kaming kalimutan. Ikaw ang the best lods. pa fansign naman. the best book mo lods. KMJS na yan. #highschoolclassmate
Very good book. I highly recommend this story. The writing is superb, characters are great. One more thing. The story is actually a nice read. I enjoy it and I think you will too.
My one and only favorite. Didn't thought that it was a pearl in a bunch of marbles. It is great and entertaining. **: The saying "I look for copper but I see gold is always used, so I change it a little.
Good novel. The story is progressing at a good speed while still providing enough detail. The characters are well developed and have some progression. While there are hints of future events sprinkled throughout to keep your interest in what will happen. Keep up the good work author!!!
The plot and characters are well developed along with the storytelling. The book captures your attention as soon as you start reading it. Definitely a good book to read.
A very good stooooory! I don't know what to say, so yeah. Anyways, you should read this because its good, just read it. <3 <3 Author, you have done a good job! <3 <3
Dude, nice story, nice **** you gat going here just do me a favour and increase the chap you release please. Oh and I can see you mentioning my country so thumbs up for
Up to chapter 49: I could only say WOW, this is a good one guys. The Story the World background i just have to give full mark for that. The character is good but for this is just first 50 chapter, pretty sure lot more can be develop. The updates is good,but still make me wanted to binge reading when it finish lol. To author ur great, keep the updates rolling please (^_^).
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I like the book. I like the story. I like the world. I like the pace of story. I like the vibe. I can't waiting the updatess. Thanks for writer by the way.
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good book, if you like guns, mafia stuff, aliens, apocalypse or cultivation give it a try. [img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend] hope we will get new chapters in the future [img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update][img=update]
Controversial review: This novel is not a military novel. For it to be a military novel, there should be girls who turn into battleships or girls who turn into rifles. All in all, thoroughly disappointed.