Reviews of The Biggest of Mothers: A One Piece fanfic

This is a hidden gem

A story of how things would be, could be, and should be if a strong yet caring soul replaced that of Big Mom's. I think this is my favorite work along with 'Humanity'. I had intended this work to be a Oneshot for the 1M views on Charlotte family but here it is... Thank you for loving this story and reviewing so nicely. It does make a difference :) Please feel free (or actually you are encouraged) to leave ideas, theories, and wishes in the replies.

Amazing, just, incredible, good Grammar, not much specific storytelling but it doesn't harm the fanfic at all, maybe it makes it even better, anyway, hope you continue with this amazing history.

i just regret not finding this fanfic sooner and dont let the number of chapters stop you from reading every ch are waaaaay to long i think it is +10k word, i am wating for next chapter author [img=recommend]

Let's Rank this Fanfic with me Translation Quality= 4 Stars Updating Stability= 4 Stars Story Development= 5 Stars Character Design= 5 Stars World Background= 5 Stars. The character writing is still basic and quite difficult to read for ordinary people but it can still be read slowly. Updating Stability is not yet known whether it will be as stable as it is now. The story development is very interesting and unique among other One Piece fanfiction, And the addition of Anime Gate: Jietai also makes this fanfic more unique and interesting. The Character Design is very good and well executed, Doesn't make the reader feel weird, It even makes the reader curious about what the continuation of the story will be. The background of the world is no longer in doubt because the One Piece Anime is great. My hope is for the author to improve his vocabulary to make it easier to read. Like People said, This Fanfic is Hidden Gem. Approved.

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Let me give you stars.. For you who want diferent story about Big Mom and Change a thing, then this will be good for ya.. Long Chapters and Nice story,. also, i hope kara and diana not in here, i dont like those two much,. anyway, This is Good read, you dont have to believe my review, but at least read 2 chapters.

This is one of if not the best One Piece fanfics I have ever read. I hope you do not drop this. A good Big Mom is awsome and I highly recomemd this to any one reading this comment.

Es realmente genial leerlo, de verdad lo amé y espero que sigas actualizando, pero sin presiones. Es un buen libro, así que realmente puedo sentir que de verdad le pusiste mucho esfuerzo ... Aunque quisiera ver lo que pasaría si termina en una batalla de Marineford... XD... Espero que Ace no muera x 10000 infinito ... Sigo de luto por eso XD... Aunque dudo que el gobierno se quiera meter con Ace ahora que se sabe que tiene a Barbablanca y a Big Mom como respaldo. ... Así que será interesante ver la reacción de nuestro mundo... ¿Sabrán de one piece o no?

It's goooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooood 140 characters Please let me know what you the other day you are going through the box because you have any other day

Although the number of chapter are low but love how the story. Hope the author doesn't drop it anytime soon or at all. ..,..,........,..............

This is really good, I wasn't expecting the crossover. But this was a welcome surprise. Your grammar is impeccable as well as the interactions were amazing. This really deserves to be at the top and it's easy to get enamoured with the character and how the story is told. You have a lot of talent. Great job! and keep it up!

Oh my, oh my, oh my /god/, this is amazing! I hope to see another chapter of this, because I mean, honestly, this is just flat out phenomenal. Your writing was really coherent and eloquent, and I just loved this so much.

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esta es una joya escondida. Quiero mas capitulos. ......................................................................................................................................................................................................

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I love it..............................................................................................................................................

I don't really know how to write a review, but I really loved this FF so I will post it anyway.... <><><><><><>><><><><><>><><><><><><><><>

I've seen OP fics becoming the side chars or somethin like becoming buggy, bellamy or even diamond jozu. but i havent seen a fic becoming a yonko its pretty cool.