The Ancient Genes

Nice story amazing work I like it Especially magic Woke upmjpat nightnjurt of read this and go back to sleep Thanks for helping my insomnia Need more chaoters

Hello author, OMG --------------------------------------------- Wow nice book OMG *********************************************************************************** you can write so good........................ Me POV ************************************************************************** keep up the good work.................................................. I would like for you to listen to 3 chapters on audio book and tell me man how your ears like to here this all most ever 2 paragraphs ***†******************.............................????????????????????????????********************************.....................................--------------------;;-;-;;;----------------------

honestly, the novel got **** when he got into the academy, which was somewhere around chapter 10 to 15. after that the author decides to include a ton of alternate POVs, which make the story stop flowing properly and now I have absolutely no clue what has happened up to chapter 25. The story's pace accelerated too fast.

This is a good novel, although the writing at the start is slow and a bit jenky it improves over time and increases in quality. Overall I would recommend this novel.

I’m liking it so far but will there be romance in the future I’m hoping not thanks..........................................................

I loved this book so much. So much so that I finished it in a single day and felt the need to re-read it again and again. Shaky start for first few chapters but it is amazing!

It's a pretty good novel, it amuses me in many ways. This is a pleasant novel keep up the good work my friend. When I first read this... My thoughts were all over the place, it's really fun and enthusiastic to read. Thank you for making this

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This is an awesome book. It has a ton of story and character development, and the characters are deep and the author seems to have put a lot of thought into it.

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The story is good but I think that it could have more background info like telling the readers about the other city's or towns that are in the world that's all.

Everything is good except for the author's compulsory POV disorder. Just POV everywhere. When you read a story, you want to go with the flow but the author skillfully destroys it. Why can't he add character names to the sentence? Why POV'sssss????????? Just fast-forwarded it to ch54 in ten minutes.

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Author should work on the updates ,,,,i need more of this Author should work on the updates ,,,,i need more of this Author should work on the updates ,,,,i need more of this

This has a lot of potential just keep working on it, mostly you should use the fact that it has a slow start to affect the world building. Also don't be discouraged by other people you can make it forward just keep pushing

So here is my review, I am at the latest chapter at the time of my review, so, let's go into it. First of all, Writing quality: I like the writing, wording, and the lack of grammatical errors, but the POVs really confuse me and take me out of the story. I don't mind the MC's POV and or some occasional POVs every 10 chapters. But not change from Lisa one sentence and then to Axle the other and Mark the next. It becomes frustrating to read and annoying to follow. It just made me skip all unnecessary POVs that are not from the MC's main POV. Updating stability: Not really have much to say about this, I cought up to the story recently so I can't comment on it. He certainly the 5stars. Story Development: This one is interesting, because when I was reading it, aside from the POVs, I didn't feel it being slow. The only time I felt that an arc was being dragged too much Is the most recent, kidnapping, arc. I doubt this organisation will be finished right now, so personally I think it should have more smaller arcs, but I actually liked this change. It is just taking too long. Not sure how many but 20ish chapters just for it and the MCs does not really achieve a major development in his power or his character, at least not now. But aside from that, I don't feel that the pace is bad, it is just that it might be slow if someone who cought up like me, proceeds to wait for daily uploads. With the arcs taking so long, it gives the impression that the story is not moving forward. At this rate this story will exceed 1000 chapters before even the final enemy comes in to play. Character design: I like the characters, al though a bit cliche for my taste, and sometimes inconsistent. I stil like them. A good example of an inconsistent character is the MC himself. He starts of as a timid character, the he becomes all brave and manly the next day just because his dorm mate gets bullied.Then he challenges someone to a fight, even when he knows that he wont win(wilson) because the form was messed up due to Wilson and August's Bromance. The character is too inconsistent, especially when he then changes back to the timid persona a bit later and it just makes it feel like a ****fest of personalities. Aside from him, the others have the basic characters you can see in almost every manga, the good guy gone rogue, the fat best friend that is perverted. The bossy one with a stick up the bum and the fiery hotheaded one. The consistency is lacking, but I like the characters, Especially Axle. The world background is actually very clear when one reads it. We know that the world is advanced un its technology and has magic, it has a mage association and a guild in power. Danger outside the safe zones and bla bla bla, read the story if you want hear more. All in all, great story with a lot of promise that is slow paced with annoying POV writing and cliche characters. But cliche is called cliche because it works, it is just that I hate when it is so stupid and nonsensical like the time when he just bumped into Lisa's boobs kr when he fell on her friends ds tits. Makes no fucking sense.

Story is pretty good, characters have a good base for development. There's a lot of good potential here but there is one glaring issue for me that is single handedly ruining my enjoyment. Please, cut down on perspective changes. We dont need it this often. It's good for exposition and foreshadowing but you're doing it too much. Foreshadowing works in moderation but when it happens every chapter it no longer becomes a hint of what's to come, it becomes the blatant answer. The shopping mall situation was so hinted at it was no longer enjoyable, it was just, "Just do it already."