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very good I love it β€οΈβ€οΈπ keep going ππππππππππβ€οΈππππ°πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
I really liked the book. I think it has a great story line. Itβs hard to find fantasy books that I like now days, I would mind sitting down and reading books like this all day
this is a good story but author can you explain more of the levels because after high class mage it gets Hella confusing π ........... thanks
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Story is pretty good but there are so many misunderstandings happening between several of the characters that it becomes frustrating. At least to me because I feel like most of the problems can be solved with just them explaining themselves lol.
.................................................. this novel is killing me.... it's soo damn good.! !! I love it!!!! thank you for your hard work Saint-sama! !!!
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TL;DR ~ The story development is good. Nothing else. The world-building is flawed. The writing quality is average. The characater designs are slightly above average. The world background is cliche. However, the good thing is - "The author is improving with every passing chapter."
Ok im gunna be honest i havnt even read a word from this book yet but from the um description or what i see this man wanna kill himself at first i found that funny ok i mean i dont find it funny he wants to kill himself its just the WILL HE KILL HIMSELF well if he died first episode and that was the end of him then gg story end or hes just not the mc anyway ree
In my personal opinion, there's too many POV switches, if we were just gonna stay with the mc and just switch occasionally like every 10 chapters, then it would have been fine. But if might be better to just stay in third person, there's also some spelling mistakes few miss placed names but it's fine. I'm only on chapter 20 so far but most of the characters seem a little"flat" like you need to build them up more, the personalities feel stereotypical.
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Just gotta say This is one of the best novel i read in a while and i like the plot a lot and the characters in this story as well Also the main characters sure is getting strong
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GOOD STORY DESTROYED BY BAD WRITING QUALITY Clearly, this could've been a 4.7 or something but the author isn't experienced enough. Flaws: 1. POV crap - that thing just sucks. Remove it 2. Typical nooob mistake - All Allies are crap, All enemies are irrationally strong. -His parents are dumb and doesn't care about him. His male classmates are all dickheads wanting to crawl upon lisa and elly. His headmaster is a usepess piece of crap who only monitors the school, no thinking and moving needed, piece of ****. His enemies only need some sketchy pill to directly boost their powers and this is clearly laziness kicking in. Author could've made a more rational approach but NO he is so lazy
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Thanks for the novel πππππππππ―ππ―ππ―ππ ππππππππππππππ―ππ―ππππππππππππππ―π―πππ―ππππππππππ ππ
Thanks. Writing quality went up after around 30 chapters and story just gets better and better. I'm glad I did not drop this early on. Solid world building and character development. It's quite bold to write a serious thriller with a dumb mc start but he gets smart with stats. No romance as of yet.