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The alpha who loved the moon

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Ruhiel
RuhielLv1Ruhiel

Okay. This book is a work of art. It's an interesting and unique twist on the werewolf trope. The character design is perfect, great world background which is easy to understand. The story development is evenly paced, not too fast and not too slow, and the writing quality is very good. All in all, this is a very good read for you. If you have come across this book, please give it a read. 😊

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Patricia_Levy
Patricia_LevyLv11Patricia_Levy

You have really good story going on here! I love the characters! I love the sneak peak into the future. I really love Selene’s fierce personality. I don’t have any major critiques. You have a spot or two where you need to add a space between quotes and the next sentence, but that’s it. I really love this story so far! I have only seen one other werewolf story that I really like.

go_kizy
go_kizyLv3go_kizy

Title - The Alpha Who Loved the Moon Chapters read - 14/14 on 7 may 2022 Rating - 10/10 Favourite character - Its Selene ofc Three things I liked 1. The relationship shared between the family members of Selene. The way her brothers don't let any chance slip away to tease her, but at the same time are protective and caring for her, especially Callisto and Ariel. 2. Her father's way of raising Selene. He never says no to Selene, even when her hobbies are not considered ladylike. 3. The very first chapter, which is actually a rollercoaster to begin with and I am glad that the author has perfectly pulled it off. So many emotions on the very beginning are difficult to handle.. but thanks to the brilliant writing skills of author which makes ir perfect and not heavy. Actual Review - It is truly my honor to read this book. I have never been much into the werewolf genre, but this book keeps you hooked. I just live how the story unfolds with all the relationships, feelings and dialogues on point. All the emotions have been expressed well. Similarly the pace of story is good. Must read for all werewolf lovers. Once again great work author.. More power to you!!

The_little_boy
The_little_boyLv3The_little_boy

The novel is really good. I always say that the first chapter is the most important chapter and the author developed according to expectations with vivid descriptions and a nice introduction of a stubborn, but beautiful MC. Thats very good. I definitely recommend this novel

Gladstone_
Gladstone_Lv13Gladstone_

This novel is very good,the world building is very good. It got me hooked from the first chapter You should definitely try this novel 😀😍

tanu_sam
tanu_samLv13tanu_sam

This is such a great book i wonder why I haven't reviewed yet!! The characters are so well written . The world setting is lit . I wish for the author to post more and more chapter !! All the best for WSA

RobynCardona
RobynCardonaLv10RobynCardona

I am amazed at the quality of the writing. The author is very eloquent in their descriptions, which makes it easy to picture everything in your mind. The relationship between all characters feels natural because the author has fleshed them out really well. Alone the tension between the protagonists in the excerpt is terrific, and I want to see them hiss and bark at each other more! [img=recommend] The world is very intriguing, and I am looking forward to seeing how everything continues to develop. Please keep up the extraordinary work! I wish you all the best for the contest. I'm sure you'll be among the winners. For all you readers out there: Please give this novel a try! The writing is honestly so good!

jungkooks_luna
jungkooks_lunaLv3jungkooks_luna

5 stars for this novel First of all the writing style is great.. The werewolf world is always something interesting and eye catching and the way author portrayed, the way everything is blend is awesome. The revenge, hate and love story would surely be very superb story of this fall..looking forward to it..

Unmasked63
Unmasked63Lv13Unmasked63

This book is very good and has a lot of potential. The first chapter starts off with a bang catching your attention the second you start reading and afterward the writing is amazing. I saw zero grammatical errors as I read through the first 6 chaps and hope this continues. Thanks for the great work author and keep it up.

T00NR00M
T00NR00MLv2T00NR00M

The authour is clever to put such a fantastic excerpt in the beginning of the story. After reading the excerpt all I could do was to read more, I was so hooked by the plot that I couldn't stop. There are only 6 chapters as of now but I hope the authour publishes the others soon because I definitely cannot wait for more.

Chopermann
ChopermannLv1Chopermann

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Fortune_daine
Fortune_daineLv1Fortune_daine

i have absolutely no issues with this book. my god, what a read. The characters are so life-like and easily relatable. the writing quality is top notch and the updating stability is just crazy. this book Is definitely going for gold.

Hassy_101
Hassy_101Lv14Hassy_101

The description was a bomb. The author has a way with words and elegantly describes things in a way I can picture them. The characters were portrayed to the max. The respect, the words uttered, down to the emotions are superb. I love the relationship between the family. No unnecessary jealousy, disdain, or hatred for one another. The typos can be ignored, but the storyline can not. I implore the readers to give this book a try. It is worth a read.

Myura_Rivera
Myura_RiveraLv3Myura_Rivera

It was such a great read. A must recommendation, you're going to love it. Once you read it you'll get badly hooked and won't be able to shove your eyes off.

claude_spicer
claude_spicerLv1claude_spicer

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PEARL_WANG
PEARL_WANGLv11PEARL_WANG

loved the writing style or should i say the story is just my type. I am adding it to the library for sure. I just want to read the ending of the story because i love how it began...

KV_Cleo
KV_CleoLv2KV_Cleo

The novel is great! The world building is so good and I really love the characters. The writing quality is impressive. I would totally recommend to read this book.

_Elle
_ElleLv4_Elle

I loved when fantasy romance combines with historical/royal romance. I love Selena character, I can’t wait to see her character develop and improve as book develops. I like how the author makes sure to switch changes at the most cliffhangers leaving you with a heart drop in your chest. Holding yourself onto the chair to read more. I am sure the Queen deeply down is good and just a bit overprotective but I hope I am not wrong. There is so much mystery we have to dig through! I reco mmend this book <3

Lu_Shui
Lu_ShuiLv13Lu_Shui

Hi Mystique! By the time I leave this review, I have gained thorough understanding of the royal family of Bellicus. Selene the main lead is the fifth and youngest princess who is loved dearly by every single person in her family. Her parents both wanted to protect her in their own ways. The author's writing style allow the readers to understand the characters. It is not packed with too many dialogues. Plot is very interesting and not boring. Before you know it, you already reach chapter 11 😂 For readers who adore kingdom stories, strong female MC and subsequent ties to werewolves, this is your go-to story. Do give it a try ❤️❤️❤️.

Daoist5FxRSw
Daoist5FxRSwLv1Daoist5FxRSw

amaziny world building! i love the story very much! the characters are just amazing and the plot is as intense as it gets! it is totally my type of novel and i wish to read more