RedSonia
I started to read this book this morning and i completed all the characters in one go. By that you can tell how amazing the book is. This is the first book I'm reading from the author and now im sad why didn't i found her works before. The book has caught my attention that i can't wait for author to release more chapters. Now lets Talk about its review points. Writing quality : The book has hardly any grammatical mistakes. The sentence structure are very good and the writing style is quite amazing. Story Development: The story flow very smoothly by what i have read till now. With the development of plot you feel yourself hooked to story. Character design : The story starts with the a grumpy alpha sulking over woman problem in his life ( Sigh having woman through themselves at man can be problem, i never knew.) But as story moved chapter by chapter you start to understand all the characters deeply. I like how author has also provide details about every character that makes u understand them easily. Updating stability : the book is quite new ans since author is still stockpiling the update is slow. But once u like a book no matter how many chap author release u will find them less. World background : the story is set in a mordon world and author has designed territory of different pack but since there is still only few chap i guess we will find more about the setting in coming chap. Overall i have found something very good after a long time. Only the synopsis was enough to hooked me and i will Look forward to read more chap and see how our Alpha Damon is going to do cartwheels on the command of his Luna Talia.😜 (sigh) i thought it will take me atleast a week to complete all the chap but here i am finished them in less than a day amd waiting for more.😍🥰
First of all ❤️ THANK YOU SO MUCH ❤️ for giving us such a wonderful novel 😘 it is very nice story, although in start I don't like ML I even thought of stop reading, but now I'm glad that I don't. right now this novel is one of my favourite novels, I'm eagerly waiting for upcoming chapters. I really want to finish this novel to satisfy my curiosity, and on the other hand I also don't want to end this novel that quickly. Hope in future you will give us more wonderful stories, again thank you so much, and take care of your health, because health is wealth. all the best for the future ❤️❤️❤️
That's some mysterious mate he has... I hope he confirms who'll be her Luna soon. Can't wait! But I need to wait TT...I understand the wait cause you is writing multiple stories at the same time—but other than that—Author, you didn't disappoint~! I like this story already~ I just hope the story wouldn't be as tense as I am already imagining it to be, considering the ML's circumstance now where people/the elders are urging him to choose his Luna soon...
i honestly thought this was good for me, vut then after i read some chapters, i became confused on who will be the female lead as the point of view shifts to others who doesn't need it. Its only my opinion so please dont be offended. its just that if you want write a point of view, it should only be for the ml, fl, and other important characters but if i misunderstood something about it then please make me understand it
The story is so addictive!!!! For those who are wondering if the novel is worth the time, start reading now cause you are just wasting time by overthinking. I have been reading for quite a while now but this is the first novel I have paid to read privilege chapter cause I just couldn't stop thinking about it. And Damon(ML) is just so adorable like such boyfriend goals. Its so fun to see him struggle/grovel to earn Talia(FL). Their chemistry is super HOT!!! And not just their bed scene but even their hand holding is so heart fluttering. Even the side characters very loveable and don't seem like gap fillers. The whole friend group of Talia is so amazing. And the villains are just hateful, like the authors makes their behaviour very understandable and puts human psychology behind it. I can guarantee that you won't regret reading this!!! And if you are contemplating just read the like first 2 to 5 chapters and you will already be addicted. **posted again cause the previous one got censored by WN