The Adventurous Gamer Ninja - Daichi Hekima.

Your work is brilliant. The pacing is perfect, the character development great and your writing quality is great. I find it really engaging work. I normally don't write reviews but your writing is admirable. Keep up the good work and Please don't drop!!!!!

The story is well written (at least way better than 95% of what you can find on Webnovel) and the regular updates make it easy to follow it. I appreciate the MC and his relationship with his grandpa was well-developed, making it look really genuine. The only 'bad point' is that the chapters are kind of short - I think there is not even 1000 words per chapter ? Sometimes it's frustrating to see a new chapter, read it and finish it in less than five minutes. I really appreciate to see that the MC is stronger than his peers but not kage level - we know he's better but he still has room for improvement.

This is overall a nice story to read, there's plot that makes sense, there's a protagonist that don't start off with a falling in love with a girl. Finally, it shows mostly the MC the most instead of having to interact with the original protagonist that much. Good job on the story!

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Its good please update the chapters of the novel

The story flow is excellent but I'd like to ask the author how much more would you do to nerf the mc so he doesn't get op. id like to ask who writes a naruto fanfic without op mc either they are M or this is torture.

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Op MC who mastered every element the story starts at a slow pace, it's fun seeing the MC getting stronger hopefully when canon starts there will be more action instead of training all the time.Canon barely starts around 250 chap but I enjoy reading it.I hope author~san can write a fanfic about Fairy Tail.

one of the best so far gamer system been read. Try to read it, its worth it

I like this book a lot!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Would he have girlfriend/wife/kids? or he would stay by himself even after Madara arc?.. Please answer me author!

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better than most fanfic i read beforegood grammer

Excellent work. One of the Best Naruto fanfic till date. Looking forward to more updates. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤

Es un fanfic muy bien hecho con un personaje muy bien desarrollado aun que aveces hay errores al escribir no son muchos y es muy facil de leer, espero que esta historia no tenga romance pues no me gusta mucho y perdería la seriedad y el progreso de la historia, 100 % recomendada

A really great and well written story with a very stong MC that still feels well paced and entertaining. I highly suggest you give the story a try to see if it’s your cup of tea.

Hello, I come here to do my first review. Well I'll start by saying that, yes! If you are looking for a Naruto Fan-fic with a story that will keep you hooked for 100 chapters, then you are in the right place. But…it has its cons too. The beginning is immersive, it's not perfect (not even close) there are many parts where I was disappointed with the author's decision, but it's a good beginning that I can say. The MC's personality made me afraid to continue reading, but over time I got a little attached to the MC and continued reading, I didn't regret it…until chapter 149… I'll explain. The author is VERY afraid to change anything from the Canon, seriously! The author looks like he was kidnapped and forced not to change ANYTHING!!! This made me very upset, because if we are reading a Fan-fiction, the least that is expected is changes in the original story (right?) Besides the fact that the protagonist suppresses his strength on several occasions and gets angry for having a bad performance in battle (????) zero sense in my view. A positive point about the MC is that he thinks about things before putting them into practice (in a very childish way, but he thinks haha), unlike MANY protagonists in which they do everything at random and hope that everything works out. The PLAYER MIND is kind of flawed, that's because we expect it to work in a way where “IT ALLOWS THE USER TO THINK CALMLY AND LOGICALLY ABOUT THINGS. IT ALLOWS A PEACEFUL STATE OF MIND. AND THIS SKILL PROVIDES IMMUNITY TO MENTAL DISORDERS” this is the description of the skill GAMER'S MIND. And you expect it to work that way, right? Well most of the time the protagonist acts EXTREMELY childish and immature, actions that someone who thinks the way the skill says would not do and makes decisions irresponsibly. I think this review is getting too long, so I'll give my final opinion. YES!! Read this Fan-fiction. Even with all that I said, I still think it was a good read (as far as I got) and I really hope that the author can try to correct this sticking to the original forever, I think there are things that should be revised and improved, but it is an enjoyable and fun read. Read it knowing that you might like it as much as I did, but also be a little disappointed as I was with some of the author's decisions. 7.5/10 I would give this Fan-fic. Inglish not is my mother language, sorry!

Usually I don't read fanfics because they don't usually show the characters as they were in the shows or manga, but this one is really good and very interesting. Wish here was more chapters though.

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