Demonic_angel
First review from the author. Story development and world background: A story involving many myths and legends, including Vampires, Werewolves and much more. The story is about a boy's journey in a world of legends while occupying the body of one of the Four Ancestral Vampires. The story revolves around Atlas and his quest to reclaim what he had lost. A journey which brings him at the forefront of the legends he only used to hear about. The story will have mystery, action, adventure and much more to keep you engaged and waiting for the next chapters. Character: Atlas used to be an ordinary boy who had smartness but lacked the strrength and the courage. With the sudden change in his life, he walks in a journey to reinvent himself. Update Stability: Daily release. Please give the book a try and see for yourself.
Okay!! From where do I start? First of all, thank you author for such an amazing book. A boy who loathes the vampire race ends up in a vampire's body and that too one of the strongest vampires. Hmm, interesting!! Now that Atlas has become a vampire, it is his turn to show who is in power. Come on, bring in the revenge. The writing quality is great and the story proceeds smoothly, although at times it does become a little confusing. But that's fine. And certainly, one of the many things the author is great at updating regularly. The story is filled with action, emotions and of course, mystery. The story is intriguing and although there are 20 odd chapters currently, it is enough to keep the readers hooked and curious to find out what happens next. Some of the scenes are so vividly described that it is easy to visualize them. Now, all that remains to see is how the story proceeds and what kind of character Atlas will turn into. Kudos to the author for such an awesome story and all the best!!!!
Uhh its not good and the only reason im posting this is because if the author thinks that this novel is worth 10-18 credits a chapter that is just absurd. Basic grammar errors and very basic and easily proofread mistakes is not worth anyones well earned paycheck. The story does not suspend my disbelief. The story also falls to the same “i have lived for thousands of years but im gonna act mentally defecient even though im supposed to be very old and wise” trap that usually is more common place in cultivation novels. Pro tip to the author your characters will never be more intelligent then you so try to find a way to “trick” or give the “illusion” of intelligence to your characters dont say they are intellegent or have other people react to basic problem solving in awe or make everyone else incapable of basic deduction its just off putting.
Read up to chapter 50, doing a review now because not sure if I'm going to continue or not. The first 10 chapters I thought were doing well was kind of unique and interesting. But after the Mc ended up in the progenitor body story up to this point has just been kinda boring. Mc is very impulsive and niave but with his age and inexperienced it's a classic trope when novels start with a young normal Mc. Think the main reason I'm not really into the story has to do with the focus now being on setting up the introduction to the characters of the story and a bit of plot development but so far there hasn't been any real moments with the characters that's made me interested or care about them. Guess it's kinda my fault I did come into this expecting more of a b*d*ss Mc due to seeing him being a vampire progenitor in the description. Also not sure if something like Google translate is being used to translate the story or just simple mistakes but there is issues with the writing with he and she being mixed up often and other details. If the novel does end up to your liking one thing is commendable to point out is the author is releasing chapters at a rate you don't see with many novels so you'll have something to read each day.
Not gonna lie this book is so bad, not one character is likeable besides one. the start of the book is 9 chapter flashback that wasn’t even remotely entertaining, and the main character doesn’t even know how to accept reality. I only got to chapter 19 before I stopped, and I had to skim through it all before I got there. Only redeeming quality of this book that I see is the amount of updates.
Lorem Ipsum errr, I don't remember the rest so let's move on. The story paints a vivid picture of the world where the action takes place. Through the usage of the tiny elements of the world, the author instantly immerses the reader into the rich in flavour world of his creation. I really hate speaking about the plot as I believe everyone should try it themselves. Despite that, solidly written cliches and relatively standard openings allows me to peer into what possibly this novel have in store. Execution of the further plot is what I'm actually curious about, as I have a feeling that it will exceed my expectations on this one. In the end, I cannot really say much about the story. It's a solid piece of the literature that promises a tasty piece of webnovel down the line. Now it's up to author to live up to the promises his chapters give.