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Reviews of The Aborted Demigod

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The Aborted Demigod

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LAZY_BENGAL_TIGER
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You have a got an entirely new concept in this world where everyone is writing about OP MCs or cultivation stuffs. I have my high expectations from ur work. I wish u gud luck.

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Lemon_wrights
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Ok, I think the story could be a lot better if you didn't rush it at the start and instead went into more detail about the mc and the world around her. The spelling, punctuation, and grammar could have been better and made the book more professional like instead of using "u" it should have been "you". that's all I needed to say. But the overall pretty cool concept, just a little rushed.