The Abandoned Hunter

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I mean everything is good, I see no fault, however, the pacing is too fast, if you can just slow down on the events taking place then it will be even better

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Interesting start and also very interesting story, I read authors previous books and looking forward for reading this best of luck 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻 author

Ten chapters in and I already find myself hooked up with the story! I loved Jay and the Black dragon 😂 Jay's internal monologue was funny. Storyline and characters are really interesting! The plot pace is good, not too slow or fast. Keep that up 😊 Updates are also stable 👍 Writing is good but there are few grammar mistakes eg: you put internal thoughts in quotation marks too, so reader can get confused it it's a thought or dialogue. For the rest of the minor errors, the author can use Grammarly tool to edit chapters and they will be easily fixed. That will help a lot 😊 But otherwise the story is engaging and interesting. Would definitely recommend readers to give it a try ☺️ Good luck with your novel author and keep it up! 🥰

Hi, author, I like this book. The frequency of updates is good and also the characters and the plot line is amazing too. Please update and make the chapters a bit long.

The story line is gold and the way of explaining and expressing the whole is really amazing ❤️❤️❤️ The updates are too fast 🙂 🙂 Nice work keep it up brat 😉🙂...! all the best 🔥🔥 do well

I like the plot and story line of the book.... Its an interesting book ,with many interesting characters and all... The people who likes adventures and all, I'm surely you'll like this book

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Absolutely awful. I understand the cool aspects of having a system but the MC literally accomplishes nothing on his own at all. When ever he bites off more than he can chew the system intervenes with inexplicable powers. It’s awful

The author stste that the mc has 185 IQ but until chapter 22 the mc is the most annoying and stupid. So i need to drop this novel because i cannot stand the mc stupidity and the story development. You can try to read if it suitable for you

Diamond_Air Love it! Plot's great and as everyone else says, it updates frequently XD. Your work keeps improving too. Good job author and keep it up! Will be sticking with this one.

I stayed true to my words and read past 40 chaps it was still bad(for me at least but it wasn't good either (MC is a chump and I mean the type that should have been given the name chump or at least his initials he rides the system and Is spoon fed everything his character development is nil so far and his IQ there are just random numbers author thought of really I can't recommend it to any one but it ain't bad past chapter 40 just in no way good

Did this get dropped? Why is there golden tickets if the hasn't been a chapter in over 3 months? ..........................................

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The story is great and all but it lacks proper world building. The MC is supposed be intelligent according to the author but MC acts like emotionaly unstable idiot. The flow of the story is a bit lacking and the MC some how kills s level creatures even though he himself is low leveled and what heck is it about an s level taxi driver! And the constant exited yelling of the MC gets on your nerve while reading. The overall Idea and concept of the story is great but presentation is lacking

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