Reviews of Tell Me When The War Is Over: Napalm Skies

This book is amazing!!! ......................................like wow my wig blew back! ...... . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .. ...................................................................

I like the mystery of what happened to her sister. It is a good hook that makes the reader want to read more. Your writing is not perfect. You have small grammar mistakes here and there. When you introduce a new speaker, start a new line. That way it is easier for the reader to get it is a new person speaking and not the previous speaker. Overall it is not bad, and I may come back to read more.

It's really an interesting book , I love it keep it up , I'm pretty sure I have two book saved in my library by this Author , keep it Author great job ☺️☺️☺️☺️👍👍👍✨

I don't know why, but I'm feeling sympathetic. Or should I say SIMP pathetic BHAHHAHAAA jk issa joke y'all calm down I ain't got nobody to simp for except dat one person........... NO, I WON'T TELL YOU

I don't know how reviews work but this right here is a master piece thank you Author for writing this and letting us read, I love your work 💋

What a novel I like the plot and everything including the characters good work here Author well done keep this up . looking forward to seeing more books by you.[img=recommend]

Great story I like ,this is amazing keep it up mistakes can be fixed so keep it up .[img=recommend]I don't know much about reviews but I like this

Great start to a novel. A very interesting premise of a missing sister with a hidden society involved. Has definite potential for a long web serial. Writing quality is very clean, just a few typos here and there. Only area where I feel there could be more polishing is the dialogue tags, but I will entirely leave it up to the author to make their choice. Another humble suggestion from an amateur author like me is to outline the novel first, outline the smaller episode, and then outline the chapters. That way the pacing will be smooth and consistent throughout. Overall, a great, fun read. Keep it up, dear author and thank you for your hard work.

It's a great book. Although grammar is not perfect, the story itself is interesting. The pace is good and it keeps us wanting to know more. I'm sad that you're on hiatus though. Can't wait to see what happens to her sis.

Not bad, not bad at all. In fact, the plot and pace are both good so far. I like your idea, its creative, as well as how the story is progressing. A small reminder though - maybe divide the paragraphs a bit more will help? The first two to three chapters were a little hard to read, but it got better later on, so I guess thats fine :). Overall, great work.

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