BigMarch
A great novel with an incredible potential. The world building is rich and intriguing. I'm actually quite frustrated by the low number of chapters because I feel the greatness that this story can reach. It's also the first time that I've been moved by a story on this platform therefore I'm very eager to read the rest of this story (^w^)/. Keep the good work, author. You have something precious between your hands ^_^.
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REVIEW Narration: Decent and immersive Worldbuilding: Vast and detailed Character development: Nice and steady Character design: Outstanding Dialogues: Realistic and Lifelike Pacing: Not fast nor too slow Writing quality: Magnificent Execution of the Genre: Good pitch Story potential: High Updating Stability: Steady MESSAGE Wow, the author was an amazing entertainer! I didn't bore out in a sec! With more readers, I am sure this will be a hit! ADVICE None! the author was a better author than me...hahaha
A cultivation novel with the system. well, there's few complications in the system with female lead. its a novel where you get everything you look for in a system-cultivation book, there's fast growth, face slapping... the writings are clear and there's not much errors in it, the author made a great effort in that. Overall good luck author with the story.
I enjoy reading it so far. Although it is very cliche, the author seems to nerf down the MC a bit. Her character also a little bit boring, hopefully she will developed into more interesting character. The FL is quite good. rather than MC, she is easier to relate with. All in all, its was a good read and I cannot wait for next chapter!
Came in with big hope for a original cultivation novel, and after reading about 50chapter it somewhat is, but not to the degree i hoped. The world is like almost every cultivation story is. Writing quality is very good for webnovel and so far the plot is very catching. My problem is the MC and her companion. I had hoped for a story where someone would start out more robotic and trubles connection with emotion, but by chapter 10, the MC is already in love with her companion. From there the story takes a strange turne where everything feels like it's trying to rush in to a relationship and romance without building the characters one bit. Rushing for romance and lemons is the sad end for so many potential good cultivation novels.
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