Very Nice Book title. Great Synopsis. Had me caught on the first line. I think the setting is great and the book is well written. Definitely an interesting read. Yep. I would keep reading. It's a good book.
Finally, I found a novel about Harry Potter on webnovel. Your writing is good and proficient, but most of all the novel is different from others. Don't give up, waiting for new chapters. π
Cool story, it needs a bit more editing as there are quite a few grammatical errors which I spotted in the first chapter, but those errors aren't fatal as the content can be understood. Only more chapter releases and your novel would top it. :)
Good ideas, well thought out, but suffers due to poor grammar and editing. However the improvement between the second and fourteenth chapters shows that the author is getting much better. There is still a lot of room for improvement but it seems to have a good foundation. For now I would rate this as an average story.
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Author used his innovative Idea in this story but he was so engrossed in his idea he forgot no matter what harry was currently 6 year old max as he only knowledge of Canon and money making. as for his last knowledge he is basically dumb. and the story deviate from main story.
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im not gonna really dwell in to it but i was annoyed i was just here fpr the hermione ship but that is gonna take me a few day just to get there amd dont feel like skipping and befor you say im skipping to early made it to 44 and im done..
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I really like this. Looking forward to more. Thank you for the adventures.***************************************************************************************************************************
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Good story so far, when Harry goes to Hogwarts, please have a tinsy bit more of story as they are much younger. As of Harry's animagus form, make him have an animal that has a tail? Or a shape-shifter skill so that his tail can enter.. you know where. Waiting for young love and more from Sara
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good one keep it up dont drop it finish it at all cost i guy out there i highly recommend this novel it keep getting interesting and more interesting......
Definitely not my favorite genre but it's Harry Potter y'know!. I was about to skip it after reading a few reviews but thankfully i didn't.
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