Maryam_Mayo
It's my first time to read a horror story. I just read first chapter and I don't know what attracted me to read further and further. The story line is awsome and amazing. The best thing that I noticed in this writing is that the author's style of depiction, as it seems like the author writes the story in a flow, I mean the concepts are in the mind and the author depicted them as they are without any exaggeration or extra spices. We learn from our mistakes and you are improving with every new chapter. I am really impressed with the influential writing, storyline, characters depiction and even the title is attention gaining. Keep it up and you will shine as a shinning star.
I don't normally read horror novels but I think this story's got quite a decent storytelling The pace is also fast and that's great The way you describe the scenes is also great, I could picture all the scenes clearly Still, I could see lots of spelling errors and grammatical errors. If the author could work on these errors, the story would be a lot more engaging! I recommend using websites such as Grammaly It'll help get rid of all the errors completely! This is a very honest review so pls forgive me if I said something too straightforward đ Keep up the good work, author!