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Boom.. This work is amazing as it's author. This is one of those first person Godly Narrations that keeps the reader on the edge. A brilliantly worked book. But the extra chapters were a bit unneccessary, but it does helps the writer to keep in touch with the reader. Thank you for the work and keep on writing..DON'T DROP IT.
Bravo! This book is filled with many wonderful words. Wise words! Teaches one about ethics together with showing the possibility of neglected behavior. One can feel the pain and frustration of the MC. I'm looking forward to see how she overcame her obstacles and how she improved to being the strongest !!
sorry for this late review but dang those 4 chaps are awesome. I was hooked the moment I read that opening remarks. I only have one issue with the compacted paragraphs. they look big even in laptop.. I suggest for the author to tone them down to small paragraphs like 2 sentences in... so readers won't have a hard time swallowing giant paragraphs.. nonetheless, it is a really good novel and it has less word counts than other novels. keep up the good work!
This story is written in a rich narrative style. We all have family, blood or not, and can relate to this book in one way or the other. The feeling of being left out, unloved. It resonates in your mind even if you haven't gone through it before. The author did a wonderful work to capture the reader's attention through the story. I love it.
It’s a worthwhile story to read. The author showcased the female lead personality very well and I’m totally in love with the female lead because of the way her life is going and she doesn't need anyone to love her. She loves herself and has enough courage to take her own decisions and be happy. The narration is in the first person’s pov which I like because it makes the readers understand who is narrating. Fantastic work. Keep writing!!! I hope you succeed and showcase brilliant stories in the future. Kudos! Keep up the good work, author!