Read some few chapters and even though it's not perfect, it simply doesn't deserve all the criticism it's getting. The book is still ongoing, and it's just absurd to judge character development without seeing the end of the book. The ccharacter development might be slow, but in general it's a good read.
1. I got a dig bick 2. You that read wrong 3. You read that wrong to 4. You checked 5. You smiled 7. You are wandering why you are still reading this 8. You saw that mistake, right? (On 7) 10. But did you see that I skipped 6? 10. You checked 11. And saw you that I doubled 10 and skipped 9 12. I said "saw you" not you saw 13. I also skipped 2 14. You got tricked 15. I'm just wasting your time, but if you were entertained, leave a like and happy reading! (and don't listen to what Ctrlkris says!)
Uhhh... This is awkward. Can't believe I have to give my trashy story five stars. Anyway...Nice to meet you all. You already know my pen name, you all can just call me Stumble. So, what should I say...? Umm.. Have you guys eaten and how are your days going? Also.. forget it. You see I am writing this type of story for the first time. I know I might have and will make mistakes. But please forgive me for that. I hope you read this book fully and make a choice by reading just the first few chaps. So...uhhh..Have a nice day and I hope my story will speak for itself. I know, I will be wasting time. But, pls read this trashy story of mine.
I'm absolutely addicted to this ongoing WebNovel! The author's writing is so descriptive that I feel like I'm right there in the story with the characters. The world-building is so well-crafted and the characters are so relatable that I'm emotionally invested in their journeys. I can't wait to see how this story ends and I highly recommend it to anyone who loves an ongoing read!