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It's a 5star all the way I really love this story it's indeed mind blowing I found my self reading over and over again . I am totally looking forward to more of your works.
Thinking what will happen to daniela? I'm a little bit curious and fascinated, though. Highly recommended. A must read book. Two thumbs up. šš
I'm so inlove with this book! The synopsis was good and the first few chapters were so nice! I'm looking forward to read more Chapters with this. š„°
Really catchy from the first paragraphs. Author has a lot of imagination and the order she chooses to put the events in makes the story very intriguing and original. Loved it! Definitely a good read! šš»
Itās very catchy I love the description line....Iāve been reading books but Iāve never read any like this .....Iām really In love with this story I could just picture everything right in front of me ..............::.:..................great work
Stupendous work. Beautiful writing and nice arrangement of the world development. It was funny saying Luvina and everything else. I love the powers and how everything played out.Expected more though.
I like how the author made the story... It is quite good and very intriguing. It just that it felt a bit that the pace was too fast, and lack more details... Nevertheless, it didn't it was all good. Kudos to the Author!
A five star for a short but beautiful work. The title is simple yet enough to garner the reader's interest . The plot was unique and clear. my most favourite thing about this work is that, it's the rare short gems we can find on Webnovel. And boom.. its completed. yeey [img=faceslap]
The flow of narration is absolutely great! im in love with the elaboration and characterizations! it really shows how talented the author actually is! keep up the good work, author!
I'm excited about the plan! I love the flow! I'm looking forward to read more! Highly recommended! Great job! Keep it up. I'm currently reading it. And the more I read, the more I get curious.
I found myself so intrigued and lost into the story!! Its so so goooood and i cant get enough! Well done author Will surely recommend this story to others!!!
FANTASTIC. It is so good and I think it would be better if there is a comic. This book isnāt leaving my library anytime soon. I am waiting diligently waiting for it.
Intriguing concept of a story. Although in there are many supernatural high school stories out there, I feel like this is uniquely told. The writing style is refreshing and the world is convincing and immersive. Love it!
This would be such a good comic. I really like this novel, the plot is so interesting and so many things about Danny is so mysterious. She doesn't know anything about herself and powers. That really pulls the reader in to continue reading. š
I was astonished at the flow of the story. It was very interesting. A story definitely to look forward to. It was an amazing concept. Good job, Author! Kudos!
This book is seriously interesting and super entertaining, i loved reading this wonderful book and enjoyed it through out, definitely recommend to everyone, great job author ā¤ļø
I like the storyline, it is very catchy. Descriptions flow well, so you don't miss a point. But the author needs to address the punctuation marks issue. A lot of statements are missing a full stop or a comma and it is a great deal when writing. So try to edit your work more. Other than that, do keep up the good work and good luck with your book.
Wow wow wow. I love Danny my favorite character.Her powers are great too. Wish i could read minds š¤£. You did a great job author.Now i have to read all and wait for you to post the remaining chapters. I want to see how Danielle will survive there š.
I liked how the story started at the beginning of the chapter...The authorās writing style and choice of words is perfect...a few scenes in the story made me laugh...Very relatable characters...Good job, Author!