A somewhat below average store novel. The translation quality seems good but the quality of the writing itself is quite poor and often leaves me confused. The explanations of the worlds power system, the mcs store systems features etc are all really scuffed. I still don't entirely understand the power system. How do you get levels? What is a mark and how do you get one? How did our protagonist get to level 15 if you need a mark to break past level 10? None of this makes sense. If it weren't for the above issues I'd give this a 2.75/5 but I'm settling with a 2/5 for now.
gawd this bad the plot is bad, the translation is bad, using the word cooldown instead of channelling, (xia xi is channelling his ice nova magic) the author also like to forget what he type or is it the translators fault e.g every rank has 10 levels in the early chapter then a few chapter later the rank disappear and only level is used,( even xia he got to level 15 when he should have been upgraded in rank and start agaim at level 1)