Twelve-Winged Dark Seraphim
So i used to have more than 500 SS then i kinda drop this story because i started to get busy and then when i came back,the new chapter from the time i left was all locked and now i just hv 3 SS left with many chapter still locked,i think its kinda okay to lock the new chapter but u can leave an add watching option for the old one cuz its to many that need to unlock when u lock all the updates even the old one and didnt even give the add watching option
This novel had so much Potential. Let me put this into perspective for you all though SGG has over 2200+ chapters.... We already have premium at 220 chapters.... Let that sink in. The story is still ongoing.... The prices for the unlocks are also high. We are less than 10% into the story don't make us drop this gem
Translation Quality:It was ok at the beginning but soon it drops fast. Even Google Translate does a better job and that says alot. If you want a headache from trying to figure out what the sentences mean,then go ahead thats the story for you. Story Development: It's ok but repetitve. This is a Knightrider-novel.For those who dont know Knightrider. Kit an AI-car gets an upgrade every episode and only in that episode the villian uses a weapon that the upgrade blocks. Charakter Design: Shallow to nonexisting Worldbuilding: Shallow to nonexisting. Total
Good stroy, a bit random on MC development. Once he is to week and trying his best to master a skill, then he dominates in another he never touched. Would love to see how it unfolds, but almost 20 chapters are behind paywall. I can understand 5 til 10 maybe bc still get decent amount. to greedy dropping entirely, will pick it half up once the free chapters catch up with paywall in like a year or more
So far I read 228 chapters. This is a good novel, worth reading, with some steady MC improvement and world building. But the novel followed in footsteps of Immortal mortal, and I feel like we will soon have to pay 11-12 SS to read one new chapter. This policy is extremely unfair, knowing that you can't even watch ad (or 2, or 3, or more) to get the chapter. If this continues, Ill just have to abandon reading...
The main character is as intelligent as the author requires him to be. That means, the author plotted things out in an outline, and when he couldn't organically wiggle his character into the highlighted plot point, he simply turned the MC into a raging idiot to proceed. At one point, the character literally shouts, "YOLO!" before doing something monumentally s*upid (although that could've been the translator's fault, but the sentiment was still written by the author), and of course, he's saved by plot armor. Speaking of plot armor, there is a lot of it. I've seen more deus ex machinas in this novel with his pets evolving right on time than I've witnessed in my whole lifetime of reading. There's just so many things wrong with the novel. The love interest comes out of left field, and she's as 2-dimensional as a rectangle. She only exists to boost the MC's status and occasionally tease the reader with some humpy-humpy time. Characters are constantly left behind and forgotten. The MC doesn't want to kill and farm beasts for beast souls because the droprate is too low??? This guy is described as insatiably greedy, but he doesn't even kill all the super beasts he sees to sell their essences. Anyway, there's the usual face-slapping, young masters, identity-hiding, peanut gallery commenting, etc. That comes with a lot of CN webnovels, but mostly for the first 700 chapters or so. If you enjoy those tropes, you'll love the beginning. Solid 4.5/5 for the start, but a solid 1/5 after he enters the 3rd shelter (near the 1, 000s or so).
1. This novel has 300+ chapters behind a paywall... sorry but I can't accept this... 2. Protagonist Hides his powers for no reason at all... People hate him in real life but he helps them in his "secret identity" and his OK with it " Yeah they hate me... But now thanks to this secret identity I can be their slave" - Greatest idea of the Century
the translator is to greedy and arrogant.. before i give 5 star except stability of updates.. but now i think i give 1 star in all.. so translator can think more and much less greedy. below is my comment below.. i will review my rate if translator less greedy. except stability update i give full mark.. why? because even 20++ch/week but locked same with no chapter right?.. not many people have money, like me. so if u can add to unlock chapter definitely i give full mark. beside to much chapter lock is really worth to read. recommended. but translator i think too greedy almost 100++ chapter locked without add unlock.. so i give stability update 1 star only. at beginning from 1-30 chapter i almost stop to read because the story is really confusing/not interested. but start 30++ chapter the story start developing good and i start to understand the story plot.. is unique in a way. modern cultivation. martial art combine with science. not many story like this out there right>?.. so definitely very interesting story.. for mc as usual and my favorite story line from zero to hero. hard working mc.. from 2 aspect i already satisfied. for world background is quite large background but i only read 118 chapter so i cant can give conclude how big the world is. so im waiting too.. definitely one of my favorite to read.. highly recommended.
I really like the story but I think there are way too many locked chapters. About 30 or do should be enough locked chapter, but I do my usual stuff where I let the chapters build up a bit then read it all, but all of a sudden over 120 chapters are locked. I read other stories that have locked chapters as well, but none is as much as this. This is just too much.